on The cat who would fly by nentwined
12 Aug 2005, 9:01 AM
Line 6 just affects the whole thing. Otherwise its a peach.
replying on Baghdad Election by Mona Lisa
11 Feb 2005, 8:55 AM
With your grasp of understanding race Stephen you should run for President, you'll probably be elected.
Did you watch Fahrenheit 9/11 or do you repudiate facts from that too?
PS your comment did not annoy me but your mother does for conceiving such an arrogant and conceited little twat.
Did you watch Fahrenheit 9/11 or do you repudiate facts from that too?
PS your comment did not annoy me but your mother does for conceiving such an arrogant and conceited little twat.
on Ceylon Cries by Mona Lisa
3 Feb 2005, 4:32 AM
For those who dont know Sri Lanka is known as the teardrop of Allah for its shape looks like a tear.
replying on Baghdad Election by Mona Lisa
2 Feb 2005, 5:13 AM
Stephen you have made no secret of your dislike for my work which is fine. I do however think voting this a 1 is futile why not just change it to a zero? Also do you actually understand it.
Purple fingers = voters
Caddy's is dual meaning a) golf which our braindead Mr Bush likes to play and b) his political allies such as Blair.
Admit it, you understand this as much as men understand women? As my Mother used to tell me - men with big pricks act big pricks
So which one are you? big boy or weener boy?
Purple fingers = voters
Caddy's is dual meaning a) golf which our braindead Mr Bush likes to play and b) his political allies such as Blair.
Admit it, you understand this as much as men understand women? As my Mother used to tell me - men with big pricks act big pricks
So which one are you? big boy or weener boy?
replying on Paedophile at st catherine's by Mona Lisa
26 Jan 2005, 6:46 AM
Stephen you are such a knob jockey
1) Sindy dolls is with an S not a C
2) If you actually put the same amount of thought into your critique as I did writing this then your comment would be worth taking seriously.
3) Reading your poetry is like wading through muck.
Good day to you.
1) Sindy dolls is with an S not a C
2) If you actually put the same amount of thought into your critique as I did writing this then your comment would be worth taking seriously.
3) Reading your poetry is like wading through muck.
Good day to you.
on Dealer (a senyru) by Mona Lisa
15 Jun 2004, 3:21 PM
5-7-5 structure like a haiku, but not of nature but of life.
on A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus
19 Nov 2003, 1:35 AM
dynamite
on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined
12 Nov 2003, 4:27 AM
Line 4 makes this.
on Mother Murder by horus8
12 Nov 2003, 4:25 AM
You go to my head like bollinger and strawberries horus8 - 8
on My Queen by heartlessempath
12 Nov 2003, 4:23 AM
Good to see a writer who is a benefit to this site
on Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe
22 Sep 2003, 11:42 AM
not bad
on save it from the age by abecedarian
18 Sep 2003, 7:45 AM
Definitely your best 10
replying on Man & Woman by Mona Lisa
18 Sep 2003, 7:42 AM
Out by 1 syl on line 3 have u any ideas?
on When old men die by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Sep 2003, 7:37 AM
Almost romantic yet always beautiful. Smooth as the scarf I'm wearing.
on Inner-city parish by richa
18 Sep 2003, 7:36 AM
Nice to see a continuation of the church theme you write so enigmatically about.
replying on The Adulterous by Caducus
11 Aug 2003, 9:14 AM
Its not its a Haiku, Haiku's have a succinct nature of syllables in a format of 3 lines with 5 syl 7 syl and 5 syl
We're all training here and who knows maybe an apprentice can become a master.