replying on Mom by nothingtoanyone
8 May 2004, 6:19 PM
No because your letting her know how you feel
on Everyone by nothingtoanyone
8 May 2004, 6:16 PM
liked it
replying on Astronomical by DeadtotheWorld
1 Apr 2004, 6:08 PM
I wasn't trying to rhythm, more like tell a story and get a message across
replying on Astronomical by DeadtotheWorld
31 Mar 2004, 8:09 PM
yeah sorry about that format
replying on The Destination of the Unborn Child by DeadtotheWorld
12 Mar 2004, 7:49 PM
Thanks man, by the way your poetry is awesome.
on The Sipping of the Light by DeadtotheWorld
21 Feb 2004, 8:05 PM
It's a poem about hiding because I don't want someone to take away what I have, and the light is symbolizing this person
on Audrey's poem by DeadtotheWorld
9 Jan 2004, 10:28 PM
I just want to say I wrote this poem, mainly to tell my girlfriend how I feel about her. So please if you comment try not to make it negative, because This poem was written from the heart and like my emotions for her are strong.
on Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe
14 Nov 2003, 9:20 PM
Nice
on Okay, so it doesn't actually work, it's still shit-funny... by Yardbird
14 Nov 2003, 9:19 PM
funny
replying on Left Alone for Happiness by DeadtotheWorld
12 Nov 2003, 8:47 PM
well this poem means that disasters can strike when least expected, you might lose it all, but you won't lose it without a fight even if it cost you your life
on Not Real by DeadtotheWorld
27 Aug 2003, 10:15 PM
This poem is about things that are happening and in which they should be the opposite of what is actucally happening, Hince the name "Not Real."
replying on Good prevails by DeadtotheWorld
1 Jul 2003, 7:50 PM
Alright the odd thing is, I respect you and your work, inspite of the way you just thrash on poeple and their work, whatever man its still cool
replying on Forsaken Faults by DeadtotheWorld
30 Jun 2003, 12:00 PM
yeah ok I know i have to be more creative thanx for the info, good looking out
replying on Forsaken Faults by DeadtotheWorld
29 Jun 2003, 11:20 PM
Well this poem basically mean this bum wasted his life he could have been a scientist and it was just his dream and it will never happen
replying on Forsaken Faults by DeadtotheWorld
29 Jun 2003, 8:35 PM
Ok sounds good
replying on The truths of war by DeadtotheWorld
18 Jun 2003, 11:19 PM
Yah thanx for the heads up on that
on Hot Potato by Shardik
18 Jun 2003, 10:02 PM
7 man this made me laugh for some reason it's good tho
replying on Bad Timing by DeadtotheWorld
4 Jun 2003, 7:34 PM
Dude I'm dead to the world because I like to write sad stuff but like it also sounds prett kewl, and I can talk to you becuase they have the internet in hell.
replying on Bad Timing by DeadtotheWorld
3 Jun 2003, 8:50 PM
lmao, I have no idea what that really means, but dude I respect you nonetheless
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
30 May 2003, 11:32 PM
Very few words cam describe how beautiful this poem, yet i don't know those words. 10