poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1261-1280)

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on some deleted poem 13 Sep 2002, 7:51 AM
revenge is a dish best served cold...?
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 7:48 PM
so, you can die for joy, but not for pain. listening through the walls... i cringe. that's the sort of sound you just can't tear yourself away from, as it tears you in two. --please fix the ???'s, though.
on Full Fathom Five by vulcan 13 Sep 2002, 7:57 AM
this is good, vulcan. may i make a few suggestions, to tighten it up?
on some deleted poem 13 Sep 2002, 8:05 AM
which would you choose?
on pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot 13 Sep 2002, 8:06 AM
nice, but exile/all alone is redundant... uzwyze, nice job
on some deleted poem 13 Sep 2002, 12:07 PM
SWEET! try lain instead of 'layed'
on Mother! by kawakurdi 13 Sep 2002, 12:48 PM
and gives an eternal abode for him as well. As a poem, this short piece encapsulates your anguish succinctly, kawakurdi. i feel it when i read it.
on some deleted poem 13 Sep 2002, 8:59 AM
you night want to stop passing off joke poems commonly found on the internet as your own work. it makes you look like an ass.
on some deleted poem 13 Sep 2002, 8:02 AM
very nice, but, where are the birds? (kidding) two things: first line is awkward. also, is a car crash really a simple clap? isn't it more complex than that, with all those different materials meeting and simultaneously shattering?
on some deleted poem 13 Sep 2002, 8:05 AM
Katie, this is a nice idea (that has been done to death) BUT please do not insult us by putting this online with so many typos and misspellings. it's just careless, and embarrassing for you. put your best foot forward, if you're going to step out at all.
on Lysander cried by bornagainpoet 12 Sep 2002, 9:01 PM
or with L. from midsummernight's dream? or with the judge?
on some deleted poem 12 Sep 2002, 6:54 AM
oh. i like this a lot. to make a mystery of the everyday, that is is magic.
on Untitled by ErgoErgun 11 Sep 2002, 10:29 PM
wanting meat is fine, and blood is necessary, but the finest slices can be soaked in their own, and lose their appeal. perhaps it is not want but need you seek?
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 6:30 PM
hot damn, pete. welcome back. butterflies with nascent cyclones tucked within their wings. yes. very much yes.
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 7:52 PM
these are sweet and innocent; but you miss the point of haiku. it's not just about counting. ask nentwined.
on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8 11 Sep 2002, 7:59 PM
updowside runandhide feathers and beaks, the words he tweaks
and has unleashed on the eyes of men
and women pixellated and fixellated and fornicated and fragmentated
and swirling and dervishing about my ears until in tears
i beg...just one little bite?
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 8:20 PM
never cross a gypsy.
on A missing puzzle piece. by trev086 11 Sep 2002, 8:21 PM
a whole what?
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 7:45 PM
i could languish in that bed all day... thanks for the picture, mrs.g.
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom 13 Sep 2002, 9:05 AM
now, was that really necessary, doug? any of it?