on Mountain Ash, Mid Glamorgan by Nicholas Jones
16 Sep 2002, 8:36 AM
i feel like you took me with you, and i like the promise at the end.
on Persephone by Lynn
13 Sep 2002, 10:27 PM
Excellent. bloody excellent.
on Regime Change by Nicholas Jones
16 Sep 2002, 8:44 AM
so, then, i'm sure that's a response you are well used to. maybe not planes for you nicholas, but imperialism does leave a nasty taste in one's mouth, doesn't it? i love it when the pot calls the kettle black.
on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
16 Sep 2002, 7:04 AM
what triggered you realizing that you will never look at her the same again, p&k?
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 7:06 AM
i like 'singing ots own little song'. that's a sweet little observation, and the best part of this. the rest of it doesn't seem to do anything but state the obvious. what were you going for here, katie?
on Lonely World by rottweiler1982
16 Sep 2002, 7:09 AM
you could get what you came for too, if'n you'd only stop crying alone in the dark, rotty
on Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
16 Sep 2002, 7:23 AM
tsk tsk. dammit man, all the places you've been, and you don't think twice about it? oh, yeah, and you should have put this under bachus, since old women tend not to have penises. hope it doesn't rot off...luv, z
on dps by decadentlaurel
16 Sep 2002, 7:30 AM
look up! look up! look up! although, there is a microcosm in the ground as well. (but i do not think that that discovery is what your heart longs for here) also, what is 'dps'?
on numbskull boomarang by skaskowski
16 Sep 2002, 7:32 AM
in bowling and boomerang, the trust that the object cast away will return is implicit to the game. what jaded game are you at, skask?
on crispy by skaskowski
16 Sep 2002, 7:39 AM
will you glow in the dark afterwards, or is all the magic gone out of them>? is it tomato soup? i do love tomato soup.
on Z higher of arts by ==Doylum
13 Sep 2002, 2:09 PM
well, wingy-d, i wish this was about me... with the Z, and all...but my lips did twist with a wry and merry grin at the clues you his within...even if the scan was off a bit. i won't hold it against ye
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
13 Sep 2002, 4:53 PM
you had me worried for a minute there, b. i thought maybe p&k's fever had been cyber-contracted...
very nice finish. chairs. z
very nice finish. chairs. z
on winter every day (Don't bother reading this) by unknown
13 Sep 2002, 4:56 PM
is the f-ing walk shovelled yet? of course it's not. why would it be? balthazar, how many times have i told you to lose those 3 creeps that are always hanging around, and get some real writing done? and go make me a goddam sammich!
on Hard Times by beakism
13 Sep 2002, 1:32 PM
has Jesu been out building hotrods AGAIN? didn't god warn him that that would get him in trouble with the LAW?
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
13 Sep 2002, 1:43 PM
how does one get an invite to Jools' holiday hootenanny? can you tell me?
please? if i stand outside his window, and serenade him with your fine rhymes, will he grant me admittance?
please? if i stand outside his window, and serenade him with your fine rhymes, will he grant me admittance?
on it sounds like dying but tastes like living. by skaskowski
16 Sep 2002, 7:37 AM
oh yeah. just right. nice.