on Operation: Nielsens by bondjedi
18 Sep 2002, 9:59 PM
dead on
on some deleted poem
18 Sep 2002, 10:06 PM
a near miss, christof
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 7:11 PM
here, have another. xxxooo, z
on God and Country by dougsoderstrom
16 Sep 2002, 8:50 AM
say hi to jesus for me, would you? and don't forget to prauy for me!! thanks!!
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 3:49 PM
what DID you do? and, did you enjoy as much this time as the last?
on Tugboats by poetandknowit
17 Sep 2002, 10:11 PM
i think i liked it better before. it felt more raw, in a salted wound kind of way...dunno.
on Tugboats by poetandknowit
17 Sep 2002, 3:47 PM
crackiling good sounds in this, p&k, from hard to hardened to softer, and down. me like.
on winter every day (Don't bother reading this) by unknown
17 Sep 2002, 7:18 AM
god! i love it when my pillow smells like that!!!
on shape shifter by mogwai
17 Sep 2002, 7:21 AM
clever image.
on first words by decadentlaurel
17 Sep 2002, 7:29 AM
why 'first'?
on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit
17 Sep 2002, 7:29 AM
heheheh.
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 6:51 PM
now, see, you re-posted the poem, but the comments, child, the comments--where did they go?
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 6:59 PM
yes. but she missed all your worst qualities, and dwelt only on the succulent finer points.
on A black sanded tropical vision by horus8
16 Sep 2002, 7:19 PM
to whom did you write this h? who was she to you? it seems to me you have a drea or two left inside; they didn't all float away on the tide. as a poem, this seems laced together, and i want it to be more tightly woven. just tighter in general, since innocence is a huge thing to lose, and i want to feel this deeper in your words, here.
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 4:30 PM
little mouses of the truth--excellent. but i disagee that every ear declines to hear. are the ears afraid of the words, the poets, or the inevitable action?
on lovely by pink_punk_kisses87
16 Sep 2002, 4:35 PM
they no longer preserve corpses with salt, ppk87
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2002, 12:34 PM
you should talk to dougsoderstrom. he knows jesus, and will even ask hima question for you.
on Oh my gosh what was that? by ==Doylum
16 Sep 2002, 10:19 AM
gold star for you wingy-d
on blockbuster by bondjedi
18 Sep 2002, 10:05 PM
you'd do better to stay away from ballbuster video