poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (441-460) and replies

Comments by<~>, 441–460 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

profane...
did you want 'chords', to give it more blood?
maybe "laid" instead of "lain"

good work, here, but not user-friendly. then again, does it need to be?
replying on Acoustic by zzinnia66 15 Jul 2003, 8:51 PM
like, "whined", not like, breathe, or blow..
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub 15 Jul 2003, 8:49 PM
tintagiles. he's lyrical, like that.

i dunno, it just made me think of him.
replying on Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66 15 Jul 2003, 8:47 PM
i tried the "eat me" first, and this was what came out.
i've since moved on to the "drink me" portion of our evening, and so i will post this:
http://www.ginbender.com/Vol1No3pg01.html
on rainday by Bill Z Bub 15 Jul 2003, 8:41 PM
i want more bounce in this nonsensey-like rhymer!
(oh, i am such a whiner!)
good star, but take it all the way, BZB.
on S c r e a m by Kitch 15 Jul 2003, 8:40 PM
i know exactly what you need. take it waaay back, and treat yourself to a little "pretty hate machine" , extra loud! you'll thank me in the morning!!1
on walking by Rodavlas 14 Jul 2003, 9:54 PM
no. last stanza--no way in hell.
the EVERYTHING is off, and that is not unique; it's just not right.
on On A Night Like This by bazz 14 Jul 2003, 9:48 PM
this is the ttle of a bob dylan song.

what do youwant from us, when you give less than we expect? the naming is everything.
replying on thought & memory by Bill Z Bub 14 Jul 2003, 9:41 PM
nut sack, hind foot--it's all pink and fated, to me.
on thought & memory by Bill Z Bub 14 Jul 2003, 9:40 PM
BILL!! do not tickle these deities!! the are violent, and virulent.

drop the great; embrace the mundane. you will love me for it.

x, z
replying on The Ebony Orchid of Theta by Shardik 10 Jul 2003, 8:50 AM
theta brain waves--dream state.

nice poem, h. it calls out for a continuation.
on Butterfield, Minn. Tommy's farm 1993 by Bachus 9 Jul 2003, 10:29 PM
sshhhh...
on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub 9 Jul 2003, 10:18 PM
all gone. new clothes. new shoes. Leo, do you still need me?
on The Drunkest ever by horus8 9 Jul 2003, 10:03 PM
is everyone OFF for the summer???
replying on The Drunkest ever by horus8 9 Jul 2003, 9:46 PM
should he charm a bipolar? cause i got that going with OCD, and paranoid, per official documents.


maggie, i wish i'd never
seen your faaaa-ace...
funny. happy 4th.
replying on 195.157.153.253 by <~> 5 Jul 2003, 7:12 PM
no. home now. and glad to be. consider the place boinked, enough maybe for both of us.

and you?
replying on the photobooth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jul 2003, 7:00 PM
and it lathes you, cc.

lathers and laves and lathes you, alustre!

xo,

z
replying on the photobooth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jul 2003, 6:49 PM
don't be shy!!tell them that NFG bought it!! go on! slather the name around!!!

(yeah!!!)