poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (721-740) and replies

Comments by<~>, 721–740 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Johannesburg 2002 by Blue Magpie 15 Feb 2003, 10:33 AM
oh my. where ever did you get this dirt????
replying on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik 14 Feb 2003, 4:19 PM
:}

dreamier.
replying on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik 14 Feb 2003, 4:00 PM
it's the 'tea' that ruins it--not intimate enough/too casual...:
mebbe
sipping honeyed nectar, golden hued
on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik 14 Feb 2003, 3:49 PM
nice.

this is the weakest line:
Sipping honey tea a golden hue
yeah. they called us 'in league with satan'! let's kick their asses! this is even worse than them saying shit about my mother!


(oh, and fix the ???'s)
replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 14 Feb 2003, 8:43 AM
dude, that ROCKS!!!!!
replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 2:11 PM
we travelled around a lot. and drank ale a lot.
replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 2:10 PM
see what comes of too much ale? i can't remember where we ate in york, then. we stayed at lancaster university. there was a pub in town called the penny barrel, or the penny bank, or something...
replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 1:58 PM
i don't recall. i had so many good ales. we lunched at the black bull in haworth. good beer. good jacket potatoes.
replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 1:19 PM
d-r-i-n-k-i-n-g a-l-e.
i wondered about the cat hiding in the branches, and found this strangely parallel universe, where yggdrasil is not a tree, but an institute that researches uranium:
http://www.earthisland.org/yggdrasil/uep.html

now my question: is the salivation due to radiation damage in the soft tissues of the mouth, or is the cat ringing a bell in the treetops as the isotope decays?
replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 11:48 AM
maybe. did your cacky pants have any straw in them? did they reek of frankinsence or myrrh? was it GOLD???? did baby Jesu leave a GOLDEN NUGGET in your knickers>????
on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 11:15 AM
thank you for the haiku.
replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 11:13 AM
yorkshire is lovely, as i remember it. the stone...well, everything...very appealing to me. actually, the only time i felt the presence of a higher power on this earth, the only time i felt as thought organized religion might be onto something other than control and mass submission, i was standing on the flags in yorkminster cathedral. the sun was shattering across the stones, and the clock was chiming, and i felt SOMETHING. for once. in my life. and it felt good.
on acid flashback by brazen 13 Feb 2003, 8:39 AM
la
you taught me a new word. and i like how you used it: anamnesis.
also, "Without so much as a by your leave" is strikingly protective and tender, used here. niely done.
on Languageing by ==Doylum 13 Feb 2003, 8:07 AM
how can ilisten when i am so caught up in looking at his face? he moves it.
on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 7:57 AM
do i know you?
replying on where is thy sting? by <~> 11 Feb 2003, 12:08 PM
manic depression, babycakes. bipolar. woo-hoo.
replying on nightly by <~> 10 Feb 2003, 3:26 PM
oh. ha. ha.
(i see my sense of humor's gone missing again. woe is me!)