on Knowledge of Porridge by Sonic Tonic
29 Dec 2002, 7:38 PM
GO BEARS!!!
replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
29 Dec 2002, 7:33 PM
GO BEARS!!!
santa was supposed to bring me one for christmas. fat bastard.
santa was supposed to bring me one for christmas. fat bastard.
replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
29 Dec 2002, 7:32 PM
how un-spirited of you. you must have been drunk for all those team-spirit meetings. (i was)
replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
29 Dec 2002, 7:29 PM
no, but i had to commute 22 miles each way and was blest with a series of bad used cars, the most memorable of which were the ford fiesta (that caught on fire 3 times before my dad agreed to let me sell it), the rambler (which got 11 mpg--a fortune in gas money for a starving art student who'd rather have paint than gas any day), and the 67 volvo 242dl ('nuff said).
it hardly ever snows in CT. but i did get stuck about 10 yards shy of a scary metal bridge near sikorsky (helicopter factory) the second time my car caught fire. except it was freezing rain at the time. and i had to call school and explain why i wouldn't be there to take my exams that morning. i think 'the dog ate my...car keys' would have been more believable...
we're not big on public transport here in ct. at least we weren't then. it has gotten better. but so has the quality of my used cars.
it hardly ever snows in CT. but i did get stuck about 10 yards shy of a scary metal bridge near sikorsky (helicopter factory) the second time my car caught fire. except it was freezing rain at the time. and i had to call school and explain why i wouldn't be there to take my exams that morning. i think 'the dog ate my...car keys' would have been more believable...
we're not big on public transport here in ct. at least we weren't then. it has gotten better. but so has the quality of my used cars.
replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
29 Dec 2002, 7:07 PM
no, not on the casting couch. at least not both of them. she likes to blow him, remember? and he likes her lips. i wonder if she likes BC too?
i don't think i'm a tar heel. i wear shoes in the winter, but one time, when i was at band camp, uh, i mean, in the summer, i stepped in tar at the boat yard, and i guess that technically, i was one for a few hours or so, until i scrubbed it off.
what is the final token of which you speak?
i am sure my school had no mascot; only 22 graduated with BFAs. there were no teams or sports, except maybe competetive tequila slamming. i was a champion, for a brief but shining moment. then, well, another time, perhaps...
i don't think i'm a tar heel. i wear shoes in the winter, but one time, when i was at band camp, uh, i mean, in the summer, i stepped in tar at the boat yard, and i guess that technically, i was one for a few hours or so, until i scrubbed it off.
what is the final token of which you speak?
i am sure my school had no mascot; only 22 graduated with BFAs. there were no teams or sports, except maybe competetive tequila slamming. i was a champion, for a brief but shining moment. then, well, another time, perhaps...
replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
29 Dec 2002, 6:57 PM
well, it made my eyes roll. but i am not a gamer. never have been. and because i don't really exist. except for settle, because, to him, i am a stuck up bitch, and he needs a fantasy like that. go on, tell him how stuck-up i am! make his day!
also, i said 'ahem' because of who you were asking that of.
also, i said 'ahem' because of who you were asking that of.
replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
29 Dec 2002, 6:52 PM
ahem?
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
29 Dec 2002, 5:38 PM
actually, the way i use the site is to see what's wrong with my poems. i'm looking for criticism on them, except for from settle, from whom i expect zeros 'cause i won't perform oral sex...any way.
i don't want to speak for any body else, but i am looking to improve my writing--looking for criticism, not praise. and you get plenty of crit from ol' p&k.
i don't want to speak for any body else, but i am looking to improve my writing--looking for criticism, not praise. and you get plenty of crit from ol' p&k.
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
29 Dec 2002, 5:29 PM
poems p&k has praised:
The Thought Of It by Christof, Silenzia della notte by Tintagiles, Rich and the wall by INTRANSIT, this is not love by Bill Z. Bub, satyr by hatters hare, brackish, Missing the In-Between, kindling, Submerged, (mine), and a few of gw's that she deleted....
The Thought Of It by Christof, Silenzia della notte by Tintagiles, Rich and the wall by INTRANSIT, this is not love by Bill Z. Bub, satyr by hatters hare, brackish, Missing the In-Between, kindling, Submerged, (mine), and a few of gw's that she deleted....
replying on The first gurl 2 eva hurt ma by Jazz_t
28 Dec 2002, 12:40 AM
well if'n she'd-a raised him right, he wouldna taken up with a floozy the likes a-her. tarnation!
replying on The first gurl 2 eva hurt ma by Jazz_t
28 Dec 2002, 12:26 AM
hey, lay off! this iz whut it soundz like...when duvvs krie.
replying on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
28 Dec 2002, 12:21 AM
see, i can tell you're not saved. you're only supposed to give 10% to god. the lord helps those who help themselves, after all. the rest is for parties with drugs and hookers, silly.
replying on what is he doing?? by xanthippe
28 Dec 2002, 12:16 AM
yeah. i have a poem or two on the site.
i'll re-vote after your edit.
i'll re-vote after your edit.
replying on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
28 Dec 2002, 12:12 AM
you should read more stan rice, too. if you ever hope to make it as a writer or a poet. you should maybe check out how the fo-fessionals do it. or something. so there, mr smarty-pants
on what is he doing?? by xanthippe
28 Dec 2002, 12:10 AM
second to last line: "let's choose"
you need the apostrophe.
and that's about it.
how do i describe this poem?
pure. willing. complete.
you need the apostrophe.
and that's about it.
how do i describe this poem?
pure. willing. complete.
on A Short Letter by Ranger
28 Dec 2002, 12:07 AM
no way. they seem smooth at night. in the morning is when you brainsmack yourself and groan, jeez, what was i thinkin'?
you were drinkin' not thinkin', my friend.
that being said, this is sweetly done.
you were drinkin' not thinkin', my friend.
that being said, this is sweetly done.
replying on solitorus by glittalogik
28 Dec 2002, 12:05 AM
what does your title mean?
replying on solitorus by glittalogik
28 Dec 2002, 12:00 AM
okay, but make it tight enough to feel deliberately unfinished
on im playing basketball by rockinindividual
27 Dec 2002, 11:58 PM
i would like to see more basketball argot in this poem. i want you to name sports stuff, and with each slamdunk, or 3pointshot, or whatever--you erase a little bit more of the weight of the anger. balance the scales of action and reaction. you dig?
i am curious, how does that fit with an overall holographic philosophy? is it aligned, against, or irrelevant? do you think what they are doing is acceptable? important? what of thier motivation?