poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1021-1040) and replies

Comments by<~>, 1021–1040 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Missing the In-Between by <~> 9 Dec 2002, 9:17 PM
oh, that was your slather. i thought it just another waking dream. oh, you were good. very good.
replying on Missing the In-Between by <~> 9 Dec 2002, 9:06 PM
tease. come shoot craps with me first.
replying on Missing the In-Between by <~> 9 Dec 2002, 8:59 PM
but my dog loves amphetamines and root beer! her name is molly. and she is lean, and slithers in, still afraid i'll tell her to get down. once i pet her, though, she knows's i'll let her stay, and her tail wags... thank you. even though you never showed up. i'll just throw another cat on the bed, i suppose.
replying on Untitled by ==Doylum 9 Dec 2002, 8:55 PM
traditionally, haikus are untitled.
replying on Untitled by ==Doylum 9 Dec 2002, 8:54 PM
well, why the fuck didn't you say so? glarg.
oh.
is the moon full as well?
are you counting mine? 'o man..' under limness. then that's 11.
replying on The Yellow Penguin by ahmyerda 9 Dec 2002, 8:10 PM
and don't skimp on the pate'.
replying on The Yellow Penguin by ahmyerda 9 Dec 2002, 8:09 PM
i'll have the lot.
what's with all the vinegar, h?
replying on Missing the In-Between by <~> 9 Dec 2002, 8:06 PM
question for you, p&k--line one, should i change 'on' to 'in'? for the double entendre? i can't decide
on Osmosis on Parade by David 9 Dec 2002, 2:30 PM
interview well, do we.
excellent.
can one eat papadum with mexican food? the slasa's all wrong, i know... okay, throw in some onion, mint, and tamarind chutneys for appetizers, and i hope you brought the fixings for hot fudge sundaes!
on Jacaranda by David 9 Dec 2002, 2:25 PM
mute statue?
on Jacaranda by David 9 Dec 2002, 2:25 PM
smile. ah. yes.
replying on Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford 9 Dec 2002, 2:23 PM
he's on the cover of 'world ark', project heifer/heifer international's newsletter.
replying on missing time by Bill Z Bub 9 Dec 2002, 11:44 AM
so, say it. who gives a fuck if it's arcane? if it's your vernacular (and it's mine) use it. i'm not one to kowtow to the "ugh-i-have-toget-my-dictionary-AGAIN" crowd. i don't throw too many curves, and the ones i do throw go mostly unnoticed, methinks. (yes, i do use that word in common speech. ask my friends.) so, make it 'morn' if that's what sounds right.

and, by the way, the scrap of paper bit at the beginning is spot on. do you know about the large-muscle-movement/brain chemistry changes that occur when brain function shifts? and that the chemical released by the muscles trigger it?
on missing time by Bill Z Bub 9 Dec 2002, 11:24 AM
this is beautiful. i wasn't sure about the buttercup line, but, by god, it cinches it. you have skills. mad skills.
on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT 9 Dec 2002, 11:18 AM
maybe it was false teeth, slipping the cogs.
on And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT 9 Dec 2002, 11:15 AM
apparently, whether you voted or not does not matter. bully for you for giving it the old democratic try, thopugh...