on Missing You by psychedelic
28 Oct 2002, 7:20 AM
the last line disappoints. the first 2 are setting us up...take us somewhere.
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:29 AM
describe 'hung'
on "turd to yo mutha" daywalker shittalker by Bachus
23 Oct 2002, 8:19 AM
i'm reading ulysses, but that doesn't in any way impair my appreciation of this slam. damn.
replying on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
23 Oct 2002, 8:16 AM
i think she went in the back room with him and his dog. she is naughty.
on one man opponent by chinstrap
23 Oct 2002, 8:00 AM
bitter to the last drop. delicious indigestion. lose the !
replying on oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~>
23 Oct 2002, 7:47 AM
divorced, of course. the poem is more and less than it appears. think of it as the frayed hem of the fatal arras that unlucky polonius chose. watch for more. oedipus is working on his archery, and writing about it, and i have some new slots to fill on the reanker. i like having a theme.
on The Dreamer by Nicholas Jones
23 Oct 2002, 7:38 AM
the more you write them, the more easily they flow. strength in discipline. nice work.
replying on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
23 Oct 2002, 7:18 AM
in america, a biscuit is made with white flour, salt, and buttermilk. it is fluffy and white and saly, and you sop up gravy with it, or put butter on it abd eat it with fried chicken. always made and eaten fresh and hot, never from a factory.
thus the confusion.
yes, mcvities are delicious. a store near me has them, and i treat myself every once in a while. they are more like what we call graham crackers than biscuits, though.
thus the confusion.
yes, mcvities are delicious. a store near me has them, and i treat myself every once in a while. they are more like what we call graham crackers than biscuits, though.
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 1:10 PM
maria, you need to go to school. it' your right, and your only way out. mrs.god is a latina. your worlds are not so different. listen to her. she is kind.
on Body Language by Ninoy_Instigator
22 Oct 2002, 6:55 AM
suspiciously strikes me as too soft-sounding a word, but i love the implications. very good.
replying on she wonders, by <~>
22 Oct 2002, 6:28 AM
a married man, christof. shw should stay away from him, if she knows what's good for her. trouble is, she listens to her heart and not her head.
on A love of the midlands by ==Doylum
21 Oct 2002, 1:02 PM
bloody hell
yes. from your reply i see that you are a master of both spelling and grammar. not to mention wit.
i am a wanker! god, you see right through me. and yes, you probably are bigger than me, since i am almost nothing, and only 11. i hardly ever contribute to this site. and, i don't know how to get my point across, or make a joke, or take a joke, or spell, or construct a sentence, or...jesus. why the fuck am i wasting my time? you'll be gone in no time anyway.
have a great life, maria. you rule. so does blade. nothing but 10's from here on it. teach me, i am so ignorant, and i obviously can learn from your non-racist wisdom. pretty please.
i am a wanker! god, you see right through me. and yes, you probably are bigger than me, since i am almost nothing, and only 11. i hardly ever contribute to this site. and, i don't know how to get my point across, or make a joke, or take a joke, or spell, or construct a sentence, or...jesus. why the fuck am i wasting my time? you'll be gone in no time anyway.
have a great life, maria. you rule. so does blade. nothing but 10's from here on it. teach me, i am so ignorant, and i obviously can learn from your non-racist wisdom. pretty please.
on Dream Maker by Blue Magpie
21 Oct 2002, 11:55 AM
prententious.
on unprepared by Aggreddion
21 Oct 2002, 11:54 AM
u shoodent use u. it's bad spellin