| Re: Mi Virgin De Guadalupe by slipping |
21-Oct-02/11:48 AM |
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did you mean 'altar' at the last? because i like it better as 'alter'. nice job.
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| Re: InCumBent by slipping |
21-Oct-02/11:45 AM |
"when intimacy rots on your body because you never used your heart "
nicely put. shape it some more. it could be great.
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| Re: health cards by slipping |
21-Oct-02/11:43 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Daywalker by Blade |
21-Oct-02/11:40 AM |
could you please take it outside? nobody gives a fuck about you. or hepcat. or blade. at least tintagiles puts a little effort (and editing) into his writing. you guys seem to just spew and spew and talk shit. this is not attitude ranker. it is poemranker. your friend blade has made an attempt at a poem. in my opinion, he has not developed it fully. i think there was an earlier version (y?) that went further?
as for you, l-a-m, you might want to learn to spell, or maybe you'll save that until you grow up? why do you need to try to verbally intimidate people you will never meet? and if i want to talk shit about the brittons or the asians, no threat of yours will stop me.
write a decent poem. that would scare the shit out of me. until then, good day, sirrah.
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| Re: regret. by darby pyn |
21-Oct-02/11:29 AM |
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you are to be watched. edit more. genius happens in the darkroom.
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| Re: this tuesday morning by teacup |
21-Oct-02/11:18 AM |
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hey wow. this rhymes. IT MUST BE A POEME!!!!
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| Re: Fruit Punch by teacup |
21-Oct-02/11:17 AM |
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don't vote for your own poems. thank you.
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| Re: Premarital Sex (Zombie Fantasy) by Sigh'ense... |
21-Oct-02/11:17 AM |
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you judge. why? leave that to the cotton mathers of the world. if you are going to abandon yourself to it, do so. you're not shockong anyone, except maybe shin.
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| Re: a comment on Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky |
21-Oct-02/8:41 AM |
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is that where you have been, wingy-d? i have missed you so!
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| Re: THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void |
21-Oct-02/8:29 AM |
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WE MIGHT PERCEIVE YOUR WORDS AS MORE ROMANTIC IF YOU DIDN'T SHOUT ALL THE TIME.
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| Re: nothing could by nentwined |
21-Oct-02/8:25 AM |
and then you stopped.
excellent.
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| Re: hah by xanthippe |
21-Oct-02/8:04 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Faith by INTRANSIT |
21-Oct-02/7:55 AM |
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it is in the title: faith. faith is an amalgamated energy, given life by the masses. and its fire can be warming or searing. youare trying to make it self aware. there is danger here. there is heat aplenty without something as powerful as faith being given vision, nevermind thought. yes? so your innocent-seeming poem frightens me.
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| Re: Faith by INTRANSIT |
21-Oct-02/7:43 AM |
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i am not sure i like the fire being self-aware, but i do like this piece.
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| Re: The generosity of others. by darby pyn |
21-Oct-02/7:41 AM |
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and don't listen to blanche. never rely on the kindness of strangers.
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| Re: Darkness by The_Shadows_Smile |
19-Oct-02/4:14 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Stamp by worldsofwar |
19-Oct-02/4:13 AM |
but seriously, why?
i was in a really bad mood, so sorry about the sucks thing.
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| Re: a comment on Loosed by <~> |
19-Oct-02/4:10 AM |
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she drank a false death, to escape the bounds of her name. when all went awry, then the dagger came...
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| Re: a comment on oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~> |
18-Oct-02/7:11 PM |
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well, it's supposed to make you feel a little sick when you read it. eww.
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| Re: a comment on oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~> |
18-Oct-02/7:07 PM |
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did not happen, will not happen. i raised a pint to oedipus when i wrote it, mrs.g.
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