poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1301-1320) and replies

Comments by<~>, 1301–1320 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Faith by INTRANSIT 29 Oct 2002, 12:18 PM
what do you want from me on this one? you must have known it inside for it to come out as it did; that's part of the reason i write: to see things that cannot be seen with the eye.
on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT 29 Oct 2002, 12:12 PM
is this the one you thought was better?
replying on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~> 29 Oct 2002, 11:40 AM
not so much fun saturday night, but now it's somewhat amusing. apparently, i'm not 'intellectually stimulating' enough for the man. although he seemed to find other bits of me more than stimulating enough. okay, so it's still not so much fun.
on Ignoranus by Yardbird 29 Oct 2002, 4:36 AM
oh, very ni ce title ass well.
on Ignoranus by Yardbird 29 Oct 2002, 4:36 AM
perhaps he should have invited them to have a go at it with him instead?
on Worth the wait by INTRANSIT 29 Oct 2002, 4:35 AM
ah. yes. so it always is.
replying on advice for the heated by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 8:56 PM
actually, to the best of my knowledge, they have never even met in a cyber-backseat. so, i guess it's not really advice to them, but more to those who are budding naturalists, ahem.
replying on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 8:38 PM
not really. vote early, vote often. this is an angry poem, and may well disappear soon, so get your votes in while you can.
replying on advice for the heated by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 8:37 PM
it is. temperatures change rapidly in a car when one is in the back seat
replying on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 8:29 PM
suggestion?
on Mendacity by kiki 28 Oct 2002, 7:34 PM
not kiki freve, by chance?
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria 28 Oct 2002, 5:38 PM
don't listen to DA; by the way, he *loves* to be called that--it stands for... lousy on ludes...or was that laid over linguine...or lucid on lsd...i forget.
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria 28 Oct 2002, 5:11 PM
h-- i dyed my hair red today. you want a bitch slap? maria's only 14; i'm a little more and then some. and i'm red again, so get the fuck out the way. there is a power in red hair that i need right now. ask mrs.g. has she red? has she ever? what a goddess-trip it is. esp. long red hair. damn. still want a bitch slap? come on, von trapp... i am a reala poeta...and my aim is true
replying on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles 28 Oct 2002, 1:55 PM
ichor's the liquor
that drips from his neck-bound cask:
aphrodesiac...

(apologies to batman ans the robots for going off-topic)
replying on For Flight by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 1:48 PM
you see, i *am* nude.
replying on For Flight by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 1:42 PM
a throwing star? could it be bronze, inscribed with the words 'love thy neighbor' on one side, and ''ass thyself' on the other, and could i have picked it up at a discount chain for next to nothing, due to the alleged typo, and might i imbed in in the forehead of one of the up-and-comings on the site? pretty please?
on boy girl by little_angel_maria 28 Oct 2002, 1:23 PM
maria, this is so far beyond the other stuff you have posted in quality as to be unreal. lose the 'scoots.' though. other than that, this is great. you conveyed a vivd picture of a moment succintly. nice job.
replying on For Flight by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 1:17 PM
1. buggered
2. there is no picture. only incest, and photographs of that are verboten.
3. f
replying on For Flight by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 12:54 PM
i go about NUDE, as discussed in prior commun-e-cations
replying on For Flight by <~> 28 Oct 2002, 12:52 PM
is it? i suppose it is. thomas locke was wronge about me. there's nothing rasa about my tabula. if i had any remorse whatsoever, i go about in a cloake of sorrow, as atonement for my transgressions. but, i do not.