Re: The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~	4-Nov-02/7:03 AM
who stood in effigy for him? why not do more with this? it's amusing...
Re: a comment on morning by kiki	31-Oct-02/8:55 PM
in my dictionary, "Basel" is a city, and "basal" is what you want. but you folks in massachusetts have a whole nother way od doing things now don't you?
Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	30-Oct-02/11:29 AM
stay out of my pub, damn you!!!
Re: a comment on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones	30-Oct-02/7:59 AM
oops--typo. fingers not awake yet. no, i love it as it is.
Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones	30-Oct-02/7:50 AM
'sleeps slips far'--tasty!
Re: Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	30-Oct-02/7:42 AM
why must she cost so damn much?
Re: a comment on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman	30-Oct-02/7:38 AM
i gave it a low vote, but only so it could rise to the top of the wurst list. i think it's hysterical.
Re: My Feet by smallsun	30-Oct-02/7:07 AM
where can i get a pair of protective feet like that, and why didn't you lend them to your uncle?
Re: Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus	30-Oct-02/7:05 AM
you were cleary not a good fit, jack. this is a painful read; you are getting closer. put down that kale gun, wouldja? the thing makes me nervous. here, have a canape, i mean, 10.
Re: i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus	30-Oct-02/7:02 AM
yee-haw.
Re: Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on	30-Oct-02/6:53 AM
whatever did you so foolishly do? well, it does not matter. you have ripped a new tear in my heavily-scarred heart. curse you.
Re: a comment on Selfish by darby pyn	29-Oct-02/6:43 PM
glad i could help. i think it's tenser, tighter now, and that definitely works here. question: what's up with the shallow grave? just being a drama king/queen?
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	29-Oct-02/1:42 PM
i think he fired him this time for bbq-ing HIS nuts (and eating them in the pantry)
Re: a comment on Faith by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/1:03 PM
how about a laphroaig, neat?
Re: a comment on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	29-Oct-02/1:01 PM
slumming, darling. that's what it's all about in the run down mill towns of the housatinic river valley.
Re: Selfish by darby pyn	29-Oct-02/12:51 PM
also, switch the order of the first 2 lines. knuckles will be white before the crash, laddie.
Re: a comment on Faith by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:47 PM
because that's how faith operates. no, strike that, make it 'that's how organized religion operates.' there. that's the frighteneing part. trying to surmount all that has power, so that it can control the faithful. strive to write pieces that make people uncomfortable. "like" is immaterial. make them think instead. in mine, people like them because i seduce with sooth. but there are barbs aplenty in this thick skin, and if you touch, if you stray, you will find them. showing the ugly side at the same time as the pretty side is tricky stuff, and you did it well. so, why apologize?
Re: a comment on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:42 PM
well, i see the small trials angle of it, but you are complaining about them. now, as for the g-string, that's a nice thought, but i mostly 'go commando'.
Re: Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:25 PM
the problem with this one is that it tells. i have no issue with a good bitch session now and again, and you've certainly earned one, but this one comes across as a litany of complaints about soul-shattering vignettes that are written off as unimportant. it spells everything out. it says, 'do i *have* to' or 'when are we going to *be* there'? it's whiny when you want it to be lonely. that's my take.
Re: a comment on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:21 PM
you can surf fo' free at the public library... much less than kinko's at .16/min...