on HATE by Blade
4 Nov 2002, 11:47 AM
WOW. THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING POEM EVER SUBMITTED ON THIS SITE. WE ARE NOT WORTHY. LET'S ALL SLICE OUR OWN HEADS OFF AND BE DONE WITH IT! (then we wouldn't waste our time reading this crap.)
on Something Must Be by Birdman42s
4 Nov 2002, 11:27 AM
again, seek the aid of a qualified dispenser of pharmaceuticals...
on Down Again by Birdman42s
4 Nov 2002, 11:26 AM
prescription drugs can solve this for you, birdman
on Bedside Angel by feathers68
4 Nov 2002, 11:20 AM
this is just awful.
on Got Balls? by Yardbird
4 Nov 2002, 8:53 AM
is self-consumption your passion? have a glass of milk, and BTW chocolate is yummy on most body parts.
on untitled by PunchMeInTheFace
4 Nov 2002, 8:45 AM
that's not what i dreamed of a a youth,but whatever.
replying on A Cold Day in March by PunchMeInTheFace
4 Nov 2002, 8:45 AM
i agree with limonade. i also thik she is using her words to drown out her fears, perhaps weaving her own CLOAKE OF SORROWE???
on fading by PunchMeInTheFace
4 Nov 2002, 8:43 AM
hoe could you have wasted this potential: :Why don't you to stay here a while?
(forever)"
arg.
(forever)"
arg.
on Stranger by feathers68
4 Nov 2002, 8:42 AM
why don't you introduce yourself to her?
on Cold Set by feathers68
4 Nov 2002, 8:41 AM
would like it better if it read: 'as behind iced farts whores enraged', but that's just me...
on Three pointed star by INTRANSIT
4 Nov 2002, 8:40 AM
explain, please?
on St. Andrews University Marxist Society by Nicholas Jones
4 Nov 2002, 8:14 AM
true.
replying on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot
4 Nov 2002, 8:06 AM
so, why not try and convey some of that? why not DESCRIBE what you see, instead of just telling us about it? i'm not trying to be belligerent, but this is a good idea for a poem and it is disappointing that you have done nothing to develop it. just saying 'i do this, and i see shocking sights' means nothing, changes nothing, shares nothing. why bother?
replying on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot
4 Nov 2002, 7:45 AM
in this poem, i see you, an EMT running around evaluating who lives and who is past hope. what did i not understand?
on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot
4 Nov 2002, 7:36 AM
why put the 'not for the weak' disclaimer there if you are not going to fulfill it? there is nothing shocking here.
on cool hand luke by royalflesh
4 Nov 2002, 7:27 AM
my favorite line:
"burned pink candles to pretend they were your body."
so sensual, but needs tightening.
"burned pink candles to pretend they were your body."
so sensual, but needs tightening.
on ITS SO HARD by adrenalize
4 Nov 2002, 7:06 AM
fix the typos. we all know it is hard to let someone go. show us why.
there are very strong emotions trying to come through. give them room.
there are very strong emotions trying to come through. give them room.