poemranker ::20 most recent comments by zzinnia66 and replies

Comments byzzinnia66, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on hermetic by Bill Z Bub 21 Jul 2003, 10:31 AM
8. infinitely better than you were just a few months ago. i'd say the hunger's shaping you.
on null by Bill Z Bub 21 Jul 2003, 10:29 AM
nice, but i'm confused by the tease of the the sister. do you man-mandle july, or her sister, or both?
on I am the gayest by walrus8 21 Jul 2003, 10:23 AM
heinous.
replying on Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8 16 Jul 2003, 2:19 PM
the rest of us bipolars have no pity for you.

you might find some at poetry.nu, though.
on Las Gaviotas by Bachus 16 Jul 2003, 11:15 AM
pretty, so pretty.
on Pretzel by daryash-koh 16 Jul 2003, 11:11 AM
why pretzel?
on Windmill by the Sea by Jeremi B. Handrinos 16 Jul 2003, 7:51 AM
let me know when you post the mp3, okay>?
replying on Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66 14 Jul 2003, 2:15 PM
Six-stepped--a 2 step, as performed by bees. :) The meter is uneven on purpose. should give the weaving feeling of a bee in flight.

Folklore is that Igor Sikorsky was inspired to invent the helicopter by watching a bumble bee (_Bombus americanus_, plural, _Bombi_). For the longest time, it was thought to be scientifically impossible for bumblebees to fly, given their mass and energy consumption. It's all about the lift, really.

Again, perplexingly obscure reference, for the literati and the geeks here on the ranker. And, of course, for the gardeners cum entymologists among us.



replying on Acoustic by zzinnia66 14 Jul 2003, 2:01 PM
there are many blues-the music kind (blind willie, etc.), the sad kind, the balls kind, the stage light kind.

the coil/wind thing is about about a Gibson P-90 (pickup, for and amp: http://www.harmony-central.com/Guitar/Data2/Gibson/P-90-01.html)

so, once again, it's about love being the power behind music. or something. i get sort of abstrusely technical at times.
replying on The irony of the dark continent by zzinnia66 19 Jun 2003, 1:47 PM
sad to feel it.
replying on A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm 7 Jun 2003, 9:41 PM
clothing in the hall is good. keys on the counter.
a pack of cigarettes--not her brand.

on A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm 7 Jun 2003, 2:18 PM
usually, one glimpses into a room through a not-quite-closed door. could it be that in her haste, she thought she had shut it? and it creaked open, but she failed to notice it since her focus was elsewhere?

otherwise, quite strong.
on KAT 2 by nentwined 7 Jun 2003, 4:49 AM
very nice sounds, k. not sure about the line breaks. reading it aloud, they sound random, and stop the flow of the words.
i, personally, like geckos. and so i laughed guiltily.
replying on Stopped by zzinnia66 6 Jun 2003, 9:03 PM
have another look, would you mrs.g?
replying on Hunting God by Shardik 4 Jun 2003, 9:27 AM
goldfish make lovely fertilizer for citrus trees, you know.
replying on Break Dancing Charlie by <{Baba^Yaga}> 3 Jun 2003, 6:59 PM
"searchin' my car
lookin' for the product
Thinkin' evry n.
is selling narcotics"
on Hunting God by Shardik 3 Jun 2003, 6:01 PM
the party's over, sunshine.
<whine> the perry's, though known ravers, made a case to the master, and plagiary's no joke, any more.

p.s. picasso's already dead.
site the next picasso's head.
on Invasion by INTRANSIT 31 May 2003, 10:49 PM
funny