on School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum
5 Aug 2002, 6:50 PM
Yes i take your critiques on board, however i still feel we need to take vis-a-vis the forecoming masterpiece, whoes title i have yet to finalise. CHrist I fucking love you. Opps sorry for the outburst
on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen
5 Aug 2002, 6:34 PM
with the wrong chords and melody this would make a really bad song. Whoreus8 stating the bleedin obvious. What sort of music do you like whoreus? - gee i like good music.
Evergreen - super little poem thingy, but not as good as the other one about a total slag waking up next to someone they don't even remember..... It wasn't a personal experience was it oh shit i may have offended again
Evergreen - super little poem thingy, but not as good as the other one about a total slag waking up next to someone they don't even remember..... It wasn't a personal experience was it oh shit i may have offended again
on Johnny Nasty by peotaster
5 Aug 2002, 4:55 PM
I feel another excrement achivement award coming on however it is not to be laid at the door of peotater but at you newhowl, for pompous bleating from the pulpit, you student nazi. You have not even written poetry yet how could you know of its demands. Let me see you work if its not in by tomorrow detention shall ensue
on For Benjamin by moonUnit
4 Aug 2002, 2:53 PM
Amythest you've never written anything and you welcome people to the site, bloody hell. Quite like you poem don't go of the rails and start getting poncy like many people here.
on you scare me like the rollercoaster by silvertongueddevil
4 Aug 2002, 2:46 PM
oh whoow. I think i shall abandon my love for Handsom Pete and lick the horn-ed head of the silver cunning linguist.
on Give me a goal by nentwined
4 Aug 2002, 2:41 PM
find yer own bloody goal ye lazy toerag. Expecting us lot to come up with one for you, as if its not enough that we slave night and day writting crap to fill your site up with, you want more. Are not my Wordes enough. If anyone does find one for you can i have one to
on The Set Back by horus8
4 Aug 2002, 2:36 PM
why do i keep being presented with an poem entitled The Set Back. Where ever i turn i am asked to vote: please vote upon these words. Scart line in line line out 50Hz 240V 50W Achtung! entfernen Sie nicht Abdeckung
on i would have you by silvertongueddevil
4 Aug 2002, 2:26 PM
not as naughty as some of you others, make them more dirty i like that.
on Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments by abecedarian
4 Aug 2002, 1:30 PM
You want comment boy, comment, and yet when you recive the sage words of (i think you will like the new addition to my name suggested by Handsome Pete) Bodh'sattva Doylum you delete them. W-hell you insufferable young pup i've a good mind to lash you till your whinnets fall of for yer impudence. However i shall leave you be for the time being please see that it does not happen again. You have been warned, mother is oiling the flail.
on Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments by abecedarian
4 Aug 2002, 1:30 PM
You want comment boy, comment, and yet when you recive the sage words of (i think you will like the new addition to my name suggested by Handsome Pete) Bodh'sattva Doylum you delete them. W-hell you insufferable young pup i've a good mind to lash you till your whinnets fall of for yer impudence. However i shall leave you be for the time being please see that it does not happen again. You have been warned, mother is oiling the flail.
on HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi
3 Aug 2002, 6:18 PM
Bloody a-mericans telling us how to use our own language, they'll be dictating of foreign policy next, and what we watch and hear.. .. oh hang on, oh
Like the poem though.
P.S Bushy Boy. Get yer hands of Filingdales i know what your up to and i don't much like it i can tell you, i may even write a really rather strong letter to the local newspaper about it. Nah shit can be bothered.
Like the poem though.
P.S Bushy Boy. Get yer hands of Filingdales i know what your up to and i don't much like it i can tell you, i may even write a really rather strong letter to the local newspaper about it. Nah shit can be bothered.
on Bottom on the heath by ==Doylum
3 Aug 2002, 5:34 PM
thank you for the beginings of your magnum opus, i dare say that if you strive had enough you may manage to haul it up to a level just below mediocrity. I suggest you look at he works of forestchild7 for inspiration. Do keep trying i shall look forward to your next instalment.
on Horatio by april fool
3 Aug 2002, 4:58 PM
Don't let them hurt Horatio, he must be nurtured like a tiny seed, he must be protected from the forces that would harm him, the fags must not get a hold upon this most virginal of boys, he must not be forced to play the biscuit game, or play the dormitory panpipes of love. Save him april save him
on The Gravity of Love by april fool
3 Aug 2002, 4:21 PM
Oh pete pete pete pete pete, your turning me on again stop it.
This poem is a smashing poem and though it pains me to say so Handsome Pete i find it far superior to other drivel I have found on this site, would you not agree. For of the same please april dear
This poem is a smashing poem and though it pains me to say so Handsome Pete i find it far superior to other drivel I have found on this site, would you not agree. For of the same please april dear
on The One I think About by ThoughtfulSoul
3 Aug 2002, 4:05 PM
He takes no heed mother. He continues regardless, mother help me save him
on Existence by ThoughtfulSoul
3 Aug 2002, 4:00 PM
Mother the boy keeps erasing my comments. Mother what shall I do.
Mother help me to be strong.
Mother help me to be strong.
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
3 Aug 2002, 3:36 PM
I have returned from the brewhouse.
Who requires my hwords nay pearls of wisdome.
Who requires my hwords nay pearls of wisdome.
on Hey! by Cha no Onna
1 Aug 2002, 5:47 PM
Master of the cat shit chapter