on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
12 Jun 2003, 5:58 AM
but still dusking? this makes little sense.
Apart form that its good. 6
Apart form that its good. 6
replying on Fate Sucks by Kitch
12 Jun 2003, 5:54 AM
I agree Robert a 6 is fair. I wrote this a while ago and I wish I found this site when most of my work was written because i rate critique as it improves you as a writer so thanks for your comment.
Please tell me the lines you liked and the ones that are a waste of time.
Please tell me the lines you liked and the ones that are a waste of time.
replying on This aint love, its shit by Kitch
12 Jun 2003, 4:07 AM
Heeker? please explain its meaning
on Love by simone_girard
12 Jun 2003, 2:25 AM
Utter Bollocks
on My girl by simone_girard
12 Jun 2003, 2:04 AM
Uhhhh Babyhood it sounds like its his weener. On the other hand this is undeserving of its 'worst' poem on p/r so heres a 5 so get the party poppers and cocktail sausages we're having ourselves a PARTY ! ! ! !!
on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8
12 Jun 2003, 1:50 AM
Rich in detail, well written but it just aint my cup cake. Heres a 6 not your fault I licked the wrong parts.
on The Drunkest ever by horus8
12 Jun 2003, 1:48 AM
I drink to die !
Probably the most apt and honest line of drinking I have ever read. Your nuts but I gotta love ya 8
Probably the most apt and honest line of drinking I have ever read. Your nuts but I gotta love ya 8
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
12 Jun 2003, 1:46 AM
Great idea and well written too.
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 Jun 2003, 1:45 AM
Where did you see my Father we miss him terribly?
DA, this is hilarious but out of respect I never laughed. 8
DA, this is hilarious but out of respect I never laughed. 8
on A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm
12 Jun 2003, 1:43 AM
Pretty damn fine pie mam. 7
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
12 Jun 2003, 1:39 AM
Strong and powerful reminiscence piece. Excellent
I will never leave you alone with your prostitutes but point taken I know I have a lot to learn I'm 19 and I have come here to learn from the masters. Mona Lisa (who referred me) is scared of this site bless her ! I welsome any comment, insult, praise whatever bring it on...so long as i learn my souls up for sale.
thanks for your comment.