poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Craychus

Comments byCraychus, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 16 Oct 2003, 5:03 AM
indeed.
on some deleted poem 20 Oct 2003, 9:51 PM
this is good. reminds me of Bright Eyes. 10.
on some deleted poem 20 Oct 2003, 9:54 PM
Strong images. Usually long poems don't really capture my attention but this one did for some reason. 9.
on Painted Air by New Life Drug 7 Oct 2003, 6:50 PM
very visual
on Palm Field Park by SupremeDreamer 5 Aug 2003, 3:45 AM
touching.
on my company by girlandwords 5 Aug 2003, 3:47 AM
wow.
on Damage by Caducus 5 Aug 2003, 4:14 AM
man..this is excellent. so strong and skilfully crafted. thank you. 9
on some deleted poem 7 Oct 2003, 6:14 PM
wow... simple yet well captured. a ten i say.
on Squeeze it out... by mrpresident 7 Oct 2003, 6:16 PM
hohohoh almost orgasmic! 7!
on some deleted poem 7 Oct 2003, 6:23 PM
i hear you.
on some deleted poem 7 Oct 2003, 6:06 PM
I think I'll feed this silence
With the sounds of my broken heart.

I like that. I love this one. Great.
on silent struggle by princesszoe 7 Oct 2003, 6:08 PM
heartfelt. 8.
on some deleted poem 23 Oct 2003, 12:29 AM
This is good... I can't point a finger to what captivated me. Perhaps its the images so wonderfully weaved throughout this piece. It feels quietly magnificent. Thank you.
on some deleted poem 23 Oct 2003, 12:31 AM
"When I blink, I’m afraid you’ll disappear from sight"
I know how this feels.
on some deleted poem 23 Oct 2003, 12:33 AM
I notice your works centers around one theme. This one is not as good as your other works. 6.
on glimpses by nentwined 23 Oct 2003, 1:03 AM
what rockmage said. heh. :)
on some deleted poem 30 Jun 2005, 7:01 PM
thank you for the comments and criticisms. i do agree with all of you regarding this poem. after reading, it does seem pretty awful and disorganised. i won't remove it as a reminder.
on A Place by Celtic 3 Jul 2005, 7:53 PM
the first stanza builds up an expectation which the ending doesn't really satisfy. nonetheless i think it's a fairly good work in a nursery rhyme kind of way. thank you for sharing.
on Mother Earth by TLRufener 3 Jul 2005, 7:56 PM
generally, this is a wonderful write. wistful and rather fleeting. it could use more poignancy though. i had to read several times to feel it. perhaps its the structure.
on Crack baby by Caducus 3 Jul 2005, 8:03 PM
I really like how cold you make birth feel in this poem. a somewhat recycled feel. like a tired soul being reused to birth an inadequate baby. the images come in chilling shards. the ending was like poison, a gentle deadly surprise. i didn't expect the poem to touch on death in the end. thank you for sharing.