poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Craychus and replies

Comments byCraychus, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Crack baby by Caducus 3 Jul 2005, 8:03 PM
I really like how cold you make birth feel in this poem. a somewhat recycled feel. like a tired soul being reused to birth an inadequate baby. the images come in chilling shards. the ending was like poison, a gentle deadly surprise. i didn't expect the poem to touch on death in the end. thank you for sharing.
on Mother Earth by TLRufener 3 Jul 2005, 7:56 PM
generally, this is a wonderful write. wistful and rather fleeting. it could use more poignancy though. i had to read several times to feel it. perhaps its the structure.
on A Place by Celtic 3 Jul 2005, 7:53 PM
the first stanza builds up an expectation which the ending doesn't really satisfy. nonetheless i think it's a fairly good work in a nursery rhyme kind of way. thank you for sharing.
on glimpses by nentwined 23 Oct 2003, 1:03 AM
what rockmage said. heh. :)
on Painted Air by New Life Drug 7 Oct 2003, 6:50 PM
very visual
on Squeeze it out... by mrpresident 7 Oct 2003, 6:16 PM
hohohoh almost orgasmic! 7!
on silent struggle by princesszoe 7 Oct 2003, 6:08 PM
heartfelt. 8.
on Damage by Caducus 5 Aug 2003, 4:14 AM
man..this is excellent. so strong and skilfully crafted. thank you. 9
on my company by girlandwords 5 Aug 2003, 3:47 AM
wow.
on Palm Field Park by SupremeDreamer 5 Aug 2003, 3:45 AM
touching.
on Beauty within by geewhiz1962 29 Jul 2003, 6:14 PM
sounds like teen poetry. i hate teen poetry.
on An Enviable Task by cleverdevice 27 Jul 2003, 4:59 PM
wow, excellent. 9.
on Candles by goddessbyfire 26 Jul 2003, 9:38 PM
i can SEE this. 8.
on Two sides of Broken trust by DeadtotheWorld 26 Jul 2003, 9:37 PM
this sounds really sincere and deep.. 8.
on The Path Untrodden by Terence 26 Jul 2003, 9:23 PM
yes, that's the word. lyrical. excellent. 9.
on Not right now by thepinkbunnyofdoom 24 Jul 2003, 4:39 AM
for some reason, that amused me :) i like it!