replying on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik
25 Jul 2003, 9:05 AM
No, I meant what I said. Ben Afleck, even if you hate him, is not worth the passion you are wasting on him here.
on The Frey by Southern_Bell
25 Jul 2003, 6:58 AM
It is hard for us old folks' eyes to focus when we have to keep scrolling down because the lines are so far apart. Maybe a one line space between would do.
on Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117
25 Jul 2003, 6:50 AM
Who's looking for love/sex on poemranker anyway? If they are, then they know what they are getting into, a harsh "4" for the unnecessary warning.
on Feasting Ouroboros by <~>
24 Jul 2003, 7:23 PM
I think the title works well. Nice job.
on Christs Harlot by Don-Quixote
24 Jul 2003, 7:12 PM
So dark.
on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik
24 Jul 2003, 7:08 PM
Displaced aggression?
replying on Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy
24 Jul 2003, 9:36 AM
Thanks. It takes a social worker to notice these vivid details and report them later in a fictionalized, ambiguous account (for billing purposes).
replying on Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy
24 Jul 2003, 9:33 AM
I did not....have....sexual relations....with....that woman....the Bird-Woman.
on Halves by impert&ent
22 Jul 2003, 7:08 PM
beautiful. Nice juxtaposition of the coming and going at the end.
on the preacher and the poet by http://findingwater
22 Jul 2003, 6:53 PM
Nice. Don't forget the politician and the actor.
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
22 Jul 2003, 6:06 PM
Well, I'd wondered what "Pimple" poems had in common.
replying on Phone Support: To Lee by http://mulberryfairy
22 Jul 2003, 6:01 PM
Thanks for the feedback, I don't think many people have the attention span for a "poem" this long. What is this about "pray to penis for rent"? Didn't you read I'm a social worker?
replying on Performer by http://mulberryfairy
22 Jul 2003, 5:57 PM
Well, this particular poem happens to be part of a set of non-fiction memoirs of poetic moments that I've witnessed w/ my daughter, so it's hard to imagine it any other way.
on Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus
12 Jul 2003, 7:23 AM
I like how human this feels. What do these poems in the "pimple" category have in common? Just wondering.
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8
12 Jul 2003, 7:16 AM
Thanks for reminding me to wear flip flops in ALL showers from now on.
on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER
12 Jul 2003, 7:11 AM
Combat fatigue. Nice that you have a place/method to release some of those painful memories, and that you seem to be able to see what happened clearly.