on Anouk by daniella
11 Jul 2003, 8:40 PM
Children are such inspirations for writing. This reminds me of Rita Dove's poem about nursing her daughter. What a gift for your child when she's (?) old enough to appreciate it.
on The Truth at Face Value by http://findingwater
11 Jul 2003, 8:33 PM
Sounds like an affair poem to me. For once, just (don't) break wind.
on The Wonderful Creators by abecedarian
11 Jul 2003, 8:30 PM
It's raining in Baltimore, so I'll dance in the rain if you'll watch the sun rise. Watch out for pupil scarring. This would make a good song.
on I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Jul 2003, 8:22 PM
I thought it was spelled dammit. You learn something new every day. Nice refrain there in the middle.
on Volcanized by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Jul 2003, 8:20 PM
Nice Haiku.