replying on My Time In Jail by Brittanyy
4 Feb 2005, 6:22 AM
I was that night...
on Oh holy shit by Lucifer
2 Feb 2005, 9:13 AM
"Man if I did what I wanted
It would leave you daunted"
I dunno..Thats the only part I like.
It would leave you daunted"
I dunno..Thats the only part I like.
on Old Friends by sliver
2 Feb 2005, 9:00 AM
I really like this poem and anyone who says anything bad about it is just jealous because none of their stuff is as good.
replying on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy
2 Feb 2005, 8:55 AM
Well good for you!
replying on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams
1 Feb 2005, 6:42 AM
LOL..It depends I suppose..If you were writing a poem about having a tail then that would be fine. But if you wrote about the pain and strife of being born with a tail then that wouldn't be valid because you ( Hopefully ) don't have a tail so you wouldnt know what its like..Can you dig it?
on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams
1 Feb 2005, 6:21 AM
Maybe this poem would be better if you really knew what it was like to be a bum on the streets; But since you don't there really is no heart behind this poem, just some person writing about something they know nothing about..Oh well...Heres a 6.
on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
1 Feb 2005, 5:48 AM
I hate you so much that I decided to give this poem a 0..Big surprise huh?
on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
31 Jan 2005, 5:26 PM
Wait...what? I...I don't get it..Probably all that weed I smoked earlier..Oh well..I'll grant you with a 10..The rule on this site seems to be that all good poems are confusing with all the big..words..and stuff..anyways...Always pass the dutch to the left..Cuz the right way is wrong..PEACE
replying on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy
3 Nov 2004, 2:09 PM
Poetry to me, isnt about skill it's about expressing yourself in a creative way. I've read through your poems and I really don't think you have any place to say my poem is "Not very good" before you tell me about my knowledge in writing go back and read some of the trash you have written. All writers have their good poems and bad poems...Yes Genius...Even you have bad poems whether you like to admit it or not.
replying on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy
3 Nov 2004, 6:12 AM
Yea..You're probably right..Vodka is flamable tho right?
replying on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy
3 Nov 2004, 6:10 AM
Yea..The funny thing is..I was drunk when I wrote this...And it shows! It shows!!!
replying on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy
3 Nov 2004, 6:08 AM
Wow...Lol..So much anger..Don't get mad at me because your poems suck ass buddy...
on Old Friends by sliver
11 Jul 2004, 8:24 AM
I really like this poem..Nuff said.
on The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart
6 Jul 2004, 10:53 AM
How are you writing about wanting to die at 11 years old? You haven't experienced enough to know anything about depression. This poem contradicts the other poem you wrote. In your other poem you talk about how you're not one of those depressed people and in this poem you seem suicidal? Whatever kid.
on Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart
6 Jul 2004, 10:45 AM
DICTIONARY make friends with it. Other then that I think the poem could have been formatted better. It was OK. I'll give you a 5.
on -untitled- by althea7
6 Jul 2004, 10:42 AM
Ok Well Im glad Im not the only one who didnt get this poem.
on I Shall Fight by Torok
6 Jul 2004, 10:37 AM
Uh....Okayy....