poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Artemis745

Comments byArtemis745, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on Snow Storm by tsolantzr 11 Oct 2003, 10:40 AM
The last line does not fit the rest of the poem very well. A little work on it and this poem would be fairly good.
on standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil 11 Oct 2003, 10:41 AM
Like the fact that there is no capitalization. However, I think that if you are not going to have any of that then you should also leave out punctuation. Just my opinion though.
on Battered moon by revy13 11 Oct 2003, 3:06 PM
Like the main idea of this poem. Some of the lines do not flow well enough with the rest.
on Midnight by jfackf 11 Oct 2003, 3:07 PM
Interesting.
on Untitled by Piano 11 Oct 2003, 3:09 PM
Each stanza needs to have more of a flow to the next.
on some deleted poem 11 Oct 2003, 3:15 PM
Wow.