on Reply To the 9,000 Poets Against War. by Blue Magpie
23 Feb 2003, 1:19 AM
This is good, great structure, killer punch line.
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Feb 2003, 2:36 AM
See you can do it, when you try.
Top marks.
Top marks.
on the price of success by brazen
12 Feb 2003, 5:06 AM
nicely put sentiments
on some deleted poem
13 Feb 2003, 2:41 AM
Nice sky personification, the poem epitomises the anti-climax and the false hopes of a new dawn. Depressing but touching.
on The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg
12 Feb 2003, 1:45 AM
could scan better
on some deleted poem
20 Jan 2003, 7:48 AM
This cannot be the work of the genius who penned "Child of my buttocks" you sir are surely some imposter having a laugh. If not you have lost your wits.
on some deleted poem
19 Feb 2003, 2:49 AM
I like the poem, but the fact is bad people,ie psycopaths have no conscience to haunt them.
on Black Buns by Bachus
21 Aug 2002, 7:04 AM
I thought the Home of the Whopper line penile reference
on Heaven vs. Hell by angel born in hell
26 Jul 2002, 3:53 AM
WE ALL GET A BIT P'SS'D OF SOMETIMES, JUST LET IT OUT
on some deleted poem
25 Jul 2002, 5:46 AM
the meter and style reminds me of wilfred owens strange meeting with good use of para rhyme, nice
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Dec 2002, 3:43 AM
This was chaucerian,witty, shitty, full of deeper meaning. Laughed out loud. "Please sir can I have some more"
on A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot
8 Dec 2004, 2:18 PM
Dark Angel
Thanks for the encouraging words it's much appreciated 10 is quite some score.
Thanks for the encouraging words it's much appreciated 10 is quite some score.
on A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot
8 Dec 2004, 2:20 PM
Dovina
Is that a Michael Jackson Bad.
Is that a Michael Jackson Bad.
on Crack baby by Caducus
7 Jul 2005, 7:54 AM
Some great lines "seeded fruit and rotten core"