on Crack baby by Caducus
7 Jul 2005, 7:54 AM
Some great lines "seeded fruit and rotten core"
replying on A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot
8 Dec 2004, 2:25 PM
Dark Angel
Thanks for those encouraging words, a 10 score was very generous where can I go from here?
ps the missing word was day
Thanks for those encouraging words, a 10 score was very generous where can I go from here?
ps the missing word was day
replying on A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot
8 Dec 2004, 2:22 PM
Dovina
Is that a Michael Jackson bad
Is that a Michael Jackson bad
on A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot
8 Dec 2004, 2:20 PM
Dovina
Is that a Michael Jackson Bad.
Is that a Michael Jackson Bad.
on A Christmas Thought by keatsImnot
8 Dec 2004, 2:18 PM
Dark Angel
Thanks for the encouraging words it's much appreciated 10 is quite some score.
Thanks for the encouraging words it's much appreciated 10 is quite some score.
on Reply To the 9,000 Poets Against War. by Blue Magpie
23 Feb 2003, 1:19 AM
This is good, great structure, killer punch line.
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Feb 2003, 2:36 AM
See you can do it, when you try.
Top marks.
Top marks.
replying on time by keatsImnot
13 Feb 2003, 2:13 AM
Thanks for your comments, the "pollen sucked and dry" line I thought symbolised the distended and redundant breasts of a one time beauty and mother.
on the price of success by brazen
12 Feb 2003, 5:06 AM
nicely put sentiments
on The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg
12 Feb 2003, 1:45 AM
could scan better
replying on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
21 Dec 2002, 1:20 PM
It was a mistake deleting your comments, I wished to reply to you but alas pressed the cross. This poem is somewhat immature, but I was twelve when I wrote it. I appreciate your comments, and as you probably understand from a comment I addded to one of your poems "child of my anus" I hold your work in high esteem, to have munificent dark angel critise one of my humble offerings, would be be akin to Carlos Santana giving me some advice on my guitar playing. I assume you are an American, so let me add the above is written without irony.
Yours in Poetry
keatsimnot.
Yours in Poetry
keatsimnot.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Dec 2002, 3:43 AM
This was chaucerian,witty, shitty, full of deeper meaning. Laughed out loud. "Please sir can I have some more"
on Black Buns by Bachus
21 Aug 2002, 7:04 AM
I thought the Home of the Whopper line penile reference
on Heaven vs. Hell by angel born in hell
26 Jul 2002, 3:53 AM
WE ALL GET A BIT P'SS'D OF SOMETIMES, JUST LET IT OUT