replying on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
13 Sep 2003, 1:45 PM
Shittiest poem ever recorded on this site! -10-
on Nicholas Martin by horus8
12 Sep 2003, 9:34 PM
Jeremi,
Please accept my deepest sympathy. A life ended so soon is tragic. I have three children around Nicholas's age. Life is so complicated today and kids are torn in so many directions with so many expectations imposed on them. I have a daughter of 21 who struggles with depression...it can be very tough...my heart bleeds for Nicholas' parents. I'm sure your friendship was a source of comfort to him....but life can be so fucking cruel...Be well my friend, Joe-joe
Please accept my deepest sympathy. A life ended so soon is tragic. I have three children around Nicholas's age. Life is so complicated today and kids are torn in so many directions with so many expectations imposed on them. I have a daughter of 21 who struggles with depression...it can be very tough...my heart bleeds for Nicholas' parents. I'm sure your friendship was a source of comfort to him....but life can be so fucking cruel...Be well my friend, Joe-joe
replying on The Sinners Saloon by SupremeDreamer
12 Sep 2003, 8:48 PM
I fucking love this one... and it sure beats the last time you were "inspired" by a piece I wrote. How many fucking people are floating around in that crafy little brain of yours. Like I sad to you before...I got to give you your propers... -10- (1st I've ever given)
on Armageddon (I Am Mr. America) by SupremeDreamer
12 Sep 2003, 4:18 PM
Dreamer,
I liked this! Is this guy a private in the army who comes from West Virginia? Best fucking killers are always rebels. They've got the most balls and instinctively know when to strike their prey. Thier a bitch to control and manage, but they get the fucking job done! "You see shooting squirrels......" is a great fucking verse! Nice Job -9-
I liked this! Is this guy a private in the army who comes from West Virginia? Best fucking killers are always rebels. They've got the most balls and instinctively know when to strike their prey. Thier a bitch to control and manage, but they get the fucking job done! "You see shooting squirrels......" is a great fucking verse! Nice Job -9-
on Ode to My Crack by J.B. Manning
11 Sep 2003, 7:24 AM
JB,
Your work is interesting. You obviously have a lot of passion and feeling. This comes across powerfully in your work. There are lines as well as ideas here that are fabulous...they fit into the context of the poems theme and flow nicely. Unfortunately there are other lines that seem to be remotely related to your theme and forced in terms of rhythm and rhyme. This cheapens your work..which has the potential to be quite good. Also I notice that most of your work has a short cadence about it. Its sometimes choppy. I'd also consider shortening this piece. But as I said, there are parts that I really liked. Joe-Joe
Your work is interesting. You obviously have a lot of passion and feeling. This comes across powerfully in your work. There are lines as well as ideas here that are fabulous...they fit into the context of the poems theme and flow nicely. Unfortunately there are other lines that seem to be remotely related to your theme and forced in terms of rhythm and rhyme. This cheapens your work..which has the potential to be quite good. Also I notice that most of your work has a short cadence about it. Its sometimes choppy. I'd also consider shortening this piece. But as I said, there are parts that I really liked. Joe-Joe
replying on Help The Aged by Mr Pig
8 Sep 2003, 4:57 PM
I understand exactly what you're saying.... I struggle with the same issue. A good sergeon always makes a minimal number of cuts when working her craft. Wel, if all else fails we've got a great future at the local butcher shop!
replying on Help The Aged by Mr Pig
8 Sep 2003, 4:53 PM
Angel,
Think about fashioning the words you've used above into a poem. You write with great passion about this matter. I'm sure you would knock out a 10!! Go for it!!
Think about fashioning the words you've used above into a poem. You write with great passion about this matter. I'm sure you would knock out a 10!! Go for it!!
replying on Help The Aged by Mr Pig
8 Sep 2003, 4:49 PM
Angel,
Beautifully put! I could not agree with you more. The book of Proverbs, my favorite book in the Bible, powerfully describes the virtues of wisdom. The irony is that wisdom is so abundently present in the hearts, minds, and spirts of our elderly....but we don't see it!! Actually we can't see it because we a blinded by the desires of the flesh!
Beautifully put! I could not agree with you more. The book of Proverbs, my favorite book in the Bible, powerfully describes the virtues of wisdom. The irony is that wisdom is so abundently present in the hearts, minds, and spirts of our elderly....but we don't see it!! Actually we can't see it because we a blinded by the desires of the flesh!
on Help The Aged by Mr Pig
8 Sep 2003, 1:55 PM
Mr. Pig,
It's funny, I'll be 45 soon and all of a sudden I've begun thinking about growing old. I know I've got some time but 20 seems like it was here just yesterday. Getting old in and of itself sucks...what more do the aged endure when they are rejected and tossed aside by an ungrateful community. Its a reflection of our times and the throw away society we live in. God save us from ourselves! -7- Joe-joe
It's funny, I'll be 45 soon and all of a sudden I've begun thinking about growing old. I know I've got some time but 20 seems like it was here just yesterday. Getting old in and of itself sucks...what more do the aged endure when they are rejected and tossed aside by an ungrateful community. Its a reflection of our times and the throw away society we live in. God save us from ourselves! -7- Joe-joe
on Fury by J.B. Manning
8 Sep 2003, 12:50 PM
Hey JB,
A little choppy and disjointed but it does have some nice lines. -6- Joe-joe
A little choppy and disjointed but it does have some nice lines. -6- Joe-joe
replying on Why by J.B. Manning
6 Sep 2003, 5:26 AM
And...unlike many fags....you have no artistic talent!
on Why by J.B. Manning
6 Sep 2003, 5:25 AM
Becuase you're a fucking fudge packer...that's why!
on What's World Peace? by DeadtotheWorld
6 Sep 2003, 5:02 AM
You suffer from severe paranoia my friend! If the CIA, FBI. SS....was as you describe your ass would be in shackles and you'd be boyfiend (i'll refrain from graphic depictions)to some hard core lifer at a federal prison. Please don't be offended but you write in broken english. Are you a recent immigrant, an 11 year old, or just a fucking illiterate?
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Sep 2003, 6:56 PM
DA,
I think your first point about the old testament is wrong. Jesus established and NEW COVINENT with the poeple of the holy land. Example: OT say's an eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth NT say's turn the other cheek. However, I do agree with the essence of your second point, namely that condemntation of non believers is part of Christian faith. After all they're the suckers that are going to get the shit kicked out of them in the end times..right? However, judgement in such cases lies in the hands of God..not man. We are instructed to "Love our enemies" and "Forgive those who mock and persecute us in God's name". The ass kicking belongs to God! But I do understand your point and now better understand the piece you have written. I enjoyed the discussion. Thanks......Joe.
I think your first point about the old testament is wrong. Jesus established and NEW COVINENT with the poeple of the holy land. Example: OT say's an eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth NT say's turn the other cheek. However, I do agree with the essence of your second point, namely that condemntation of non believers is part of Christian faith. After all they're the suckers that are going to get the shit kicked out of them in the end times..right? However, judgement in such cases lies in the hands of God..not man. We are instructed to "Love our enemies" and "Forgive those who mock and persecute us in God's name". The ass kicking belongs to God! But I do understand your point and now better understand the piece you have written. I enjoyed the discussion. Thanks......Joe.
replying on A Poem For World Peace. by GAY AS FU*K
4 Sep 2003, 6:42 PM
The world has not changed since the beginning of time. The rules that dominate man are as rigid as those found in the physical world. We are ruled by lust, greed, and an unquenchable thirst for power and domination. You can fight all you want, the world will remain what it always has been. Sorry to burst your bubble. Good luck!
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Sep 2003, 6:23 PM
Don't understand the difference between giving sight to the blind and ripping their fucking eyes out?. Can't quite seperate instruction from condemnation? Condemnation is old testiment stuff. Read your Bible and you'll understand.
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Sep 2003, 6:10 PM
I understand what you say DA...but Jesus came to heal not to condem. Maybe we're getting into semantics...do you get my point?
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Sep 2003, 5:59 PM
All right DA is this the new math they were talking about in 1967? I find it interesting that give you give Christianity such high scores then write a poem that focuses on Christian condemnation of a Muslim. If you were setting out to "reflect Christian values" you should have focused on mercy, justice, love, and forgivness for these abound in the Christian faith. Maybe we have more in common than you think because I too score the faith a perfect 10 out of 10. Peace.
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Sep 2003, 5:52 PM
There's no such thing as a wrong opinion????? What the fuck are you talking about? Stay away from the open chemical containers..they wreak havoc with your mind!!! You call yourself a Christian then make such a ridiculous statement....Oh there's no such thing as wrong and right..it's all a matter of opinion!! What the hell did Christ die for....divergent opinions or sin? Grow a spine.
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Sep 2003, 2:21 PM
You obviously missed the point of my comment. I was not mocking Islam, although I do in fact think it is a very dangerous religion that presently threatens the world. I found it ironic that DA choose a Muslim as a victim of Christian condemnation. As for your claim that all religions "are right" I really find such thinking to be pure hog-wash. The Holy books of the worlds major religions are completely at odds with eachother both historically and theologically. For example, Christians claim Jesus to be the Christ..the incarnation of God. To muslims such thinking is blasphamy worthy of the most brutal punishment. True Muslims recognize Jesus as a prophit...but that's it. How on earth can both of these points of view be true?? Wake up and face the music!