on 10-72 by dragonfly
18 Nov 2003, 10:13 AM
Slap my ass and call me sally, this poem rocks!
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2003, 12:51 PM
I wish i lived in your world. So fluffy and fuzzy. hehe. I like the structure and flow of this one.
on Smiling by Jill Stockinger
2 Dec 2003, 3:05 PM
I'm not sure what's more interesting, the flow, structure, depth, simplicity, or the votes and comments. hehe. Good piece.
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2003, 3:40 PM
too long for my ADD sufferin ass...but I like the first few lines. ;-)
on Virgin Poet by emilyowey
2 Dec 2003, 3:43 PM
SCHWEEEEEEEEEEEEET! I LOVE this poem. The flow, the vocab, the forward thrusting cadence. 10!
on some deleted poem
3 Dec 2003, 9:42 AM
oh boo hoo, everyone is picking on me, oh boo hoo. I'm so hurt. HA HA. Dickcheese.
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88
3 Dec 2003, 11:03 AM
If you took out some of the excessive -so's- it would be so much better. ;-)
on The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker
3 Dec 2003, 11:06 AM
MJ IS INNOCENT!
on How Many Miles? by miraclemaker
3 Dec 2003, 11:08 AM
hmm, interesting.
on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined
3 Dec 2003, 11:10 AM
It's ok. I don't know...I just don't like it.
on some deleted poem
3 Dec 2003, 12:08 PM
beautiful. I like your style.
on Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos
3 Dec 2003, 2:07 PM
I don't mind a fraction of your poetry. Though is says very little for your personality.
on some deleted poem
3 Dec 2003, 2:31 PM
eh
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2003, 10:44 AM
APPLAUSE CHRYSTAL...way to dig. I knew you had it in you! I love this one. :-)
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2003, 10:47 AM
eh...seems a bit bland. I like your username though.
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2003, 10:48 AM
my sausage is perfect.
on Being H.U.M.A.N. by SatanicSuperman
4 Dec 2003, 1:58 PM
*breath
Other than that, I like it. The rhym is a little choppy, but I think you could smooth it out pretty easily.
Other than that, I like it. The rhym is a little choppy, but I think you could smooth it out pretty easily.
on Hey, Zeus has disco Balls by Shardik
4 Dec 2003, 3:48 PM
fun
on All Alone In A Selfish Moment by ARTIE
8 Dec 2003, 10:25 AM
weak
on saltwater bath by J.B. Manning
27 Apr 2004, 8:17 PM
The absense of sorrow fills my mind...meaning that sorrow is not present. I dunno, I worded it that way with the intention of suggesting that sorrow was there, trying to invade my thoughts, but I wouldn't let it.