poemranker ::20 most recent comments by J.B. Manning (41-60)

Comments byJ.B. Manning, 41–60 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 1 Oct 2003, 4:02 PM
Your insidious sentiments never fail to raise the hairs on the back of my balls. For you, this is a compliment.


on Mourning Glory by William Delacroix 10 Sep 2003, 12:55 PM
It's pretty good. It's not one of your best, but it's good. Um, I don't think you can use that last line though. I think even using a single line that someone else wrote is still Plagiarism, isn't it?
on Wasted Words by ho_hum 26 Sep 2003, 1:47 PM
pretty good. nice and simple.
on Ctrl freak (Alt+ version) by <~> 26 Sep 2003, 1:49 PM
well, I alt+f4 it, but not before saying it's very cute.
on OM by SupremeDreamer 29 Sep 2003, 11:08 AM
Interesting piece. What's the Poemwanker award?
on Love doggerel by thavimatola 29 Sep 2003, 11:13 AM
I don't really get it either, but I like the reference to the drunkard working at the nuclear plant.
on War Grave by Caducus 29 Sep 2003, 11:15 AM
I like it.
on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29 Sep 2003, 5:03 PM
"last year, my best bud was mown down," were they driving by on a John Dear?
on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29 Sep 2003, 5:02 PM
wow, what a freaking literary genious you are.
on Untitled by revy13 1 Oct 2003, 9:15 AM
hmmmm not much to say on this one. I like it.
on Desire by revy13 1 Oct 2003, 4:04 PM
suffering with inner serenity...lovely line. Not sure about the one before it though.
on The Fucktory by horus8 2 Oct 2003, 10:52 AM
very creative and clear. Though I'm always against racism and biggotry, I admit appreciating your honesty for fear of "jews and negroids." As is common practice where fear is so freely distributed.
on angst by nentwined 2 Oct 2003, 1:05 PM
lovely. ;-)
on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus 2 Oct 2003, 1:11 PM
I like this a lot.
on some deleted poem 2 Oct 2003, 1:20 PM
Some parts caught my attention, others faded like night into day, but it might be more attributed to my drowsy work day. I give it a 7 all the same.


on A London Cafe by mrpresident 2 Oct 2003, 1:33 PM
I like the message in this poem. I think you could work the lyric into something more fluid, but I like the core of it.
on the way things are goin' by irishfolksuicide 2 Oct 2003, 3:22 PM
short and sweet
on On the Occasion by tadpole 2 Oct 2003, 3:23 PM
I like the last line best.
on Under Blood Oak by horus8 3 Oct 2003, 3:25 PM
I like most of it, but there are a couple parts that I didn't feel completely struck by.

This one being my favorite part...
Stretch limbing dusks' arc
The red under your bark
And how you left your mark
On me, never the seasons...
on some deleted poem 3 Oct 2003, 3:20 PM
Here's a green seven for your brass ballz.