on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2003, 1:12 PM
Is this a pimple poem? Ok, I was going to give some gentle suggestions toward improvement until I read, "As long as this all was such." I don't think that is even English. As long as this all was such...makes me feel like I tripped on a speed bump and landed in glass-ridden gravel...and not on purpose either.
on Back In Time by stolenpurity
2 Sep 2003, 4:06 PM
bleh...cliche' without the cathy tune.
on Back In Time by stolenpurity
2 Sep 2003, 4:09 PM
*catchy
on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe
2 Sep 2003, 4:07 PM
*catchy
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 3:58 PM
nice, very nice. I like it.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 4:19 PM
hmm, the redundancy didn't have it's effect on me. Short poem with less to say that it appears. Though the message is clear.
on Curiously here by philthegreek
3 Sep 2003, 1:02 PM
hmmm. I'd say that this poem made me feel like nothing at all...just.............
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2003, 1:04 PM
interesting form of self expression indeed. Strangely though, I like it.
on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme
3 Sep 2003, 1:17 PM
ooooh, I love this one.
allow Your mushroom brush to paint me white - Oh man, that's like the second kewlest thing I've ever heard!
allow Your mushroom brush to paint me white - Oh man, that's like the second kewlest thing I've ever heard!
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 4:02 PM
Raw, angry, full of energy, which I like. Only, there are a few spelling errors and well, the construction could use some work. I'm all for raw passion, but I think it needs honing, like a sword.
on Nitemareweaver by William Delacroix
2 Sep 2003, 4:52 PM
The quality of the poem isn't that great. The feeling seems to be there, but I'm not sure you're feeling what you're saying, WHEN you're saying it.
As for electroman1979s comment, puke on you bible thumper.
As for electroman1979s comment, puke on you bible thumper.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 3:57 PM
interesting. I like how it just radiates...for a moment.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 4:16 PM
what's up with the statement about Romans and Chinese? I'm voting this a zero for that, though I think the overall quality of the poem would be good. Unless I'm misinterpreting your racism.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 4:23 PM
yeah, that's the last time I'll be clicking on anything with your name...
on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian
2 Sep 2003, 4:40 PM
I can't believe anyone would give it a ten.
on Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge
2 Sep 2003, 4:31 PM
This poem sucked. Both context and quality. Bleh.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 4:55 PM
haha
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 4:45 PM
I can't finish it. The rhythm is way to choppy. It needs major revision and you rhymed hand with husband. I can't go on...
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2003, 1:03 PM
uh...