on some deleted poem
31 May 2006, 10:21 PM
I like it. . .it's got that cool sad/happy thing going
on some deleted poem
31 May 2006, 10:25 PM
I love this one! I wish I could write a poem like that. I'll just have to read yours instead.
on some deleted poem
31 May 2006, 10:27 PM
Whoa! If this was printed out on some kind of card I would use it as a bookmark or something. . .
on some deleted poem
31 May 2006, 10:23 PM
I think the next time you are at a camp fire or even on a lake at night with a flashlight you should resite this one
on Social Awarness by midnitebeauty101
16 Mar 2005, 5:19 PM
is this a true story?
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on The Runaway by bamf909
28 Feb 2005, 11:29 PM
More, more, give us more. . .I like your poems
on This path by midnitebeauty101
16 Mar 2005, 5:18 PM
I don't sense much feeling in the poem, but I bet you have a lot more you could put into it?
on Broken by midnitebeauty101
16 Mar 2005, 5:16 PM
I really like the first 6 lines, and the last four lines except the very last one . . .I'll have to check out some of your other poems eh
on melancholy: by Sapphire
21 Mar 2005, 8:53 PM
nice
on Tribulations of the ear and eye by oneglove
23 Mar 2005, 6:49 PM
That was fun to read!
on a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove
23 Mar 2005, 6:52 PM
Dang! I like it is an understatement
on the victory by oneglove
23 Mar 2005, 7:00 PM
love the topic but I've seen your other poems and I bet you could make it flow a lot better
on Listless Nights by blindwriter
4 Apr 2005, 9:29 PM
I love it. . .it's like I can see the picture you painted with the poem in my mind
on Life Before Birth by GregDeEgg
17 Sep 2005, 9:31 PM
:)
on Johnny by MacFrantic
29 Sep 2005, 7:40 PM
I would like to hear it read
on The Man with the Fiberglass Head by MacFrantic
29 Sep 2005, 8:03 PM
I like it
on on passing through some small town by Dental Panic
4 Oct 2005, 7:00 PM
I like it, funny, 8.5