on Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me by EggbertShootsFire
29 Jul 2002, 8:15 PM
You might have at least quoted phrases that I actually INCLUDED in the poem. This was written for Blake (in his style) in celebration of his surgery, which allowed him to be able to finally walk for the first time in his life. But have a nice day, regardless of your opinion of my work.
on Uninformed, pseudo-philosophical thoughts about existence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
29 Jul 2002, 7:01 PM
Not a traditional haiku, but what the heck, eh?
on My days work by lucky_cmc
29 Jul 2002, 6:59 PM
It'd be nice to see some colourful and descriptive language. It's too straightforward and mundane.