on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2003, 10:58 AM
Are you ready for our initial push? Tonight after dinner I'll write it. This poem is brilliant by the way. 10.
on Constant Penetration by William Delacroix
16 Sep 2003, 5:45 PM
Yes, so tired and bent they'd bend.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 10:25 PM
will you be my gaurdian?
You can touch my gourd.
You can touch my gourd.
on I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin
9 Sep 2003, 11:51 AM
Oh boy! umm I'll take that and a sanewitch, pliz.
on justly now included by A. Nomaly
2 Sep 2003, 3:02 PM
For sure.
on Happy 29. a little late by A. Nomaly
2 Sep 2003, 2:21 PM
Very good.
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2003, 5:53 PM
You are awfully amusing. Read more about the techtonic plates and less about washing dinner plates, because you're being psychologically 101 simplistic and way off. Your rhymes were like leaves through the eaves of summer's sleeves but cleave age plastic surgeon weave ills are forever and hereditary. Join the pagan prince. Or i'll thorn apple the baby fat my groin and wisk you away any way.
on canto di desiderio by Bill Z Bub
9 Sep 2003, 10:52 AM
Well, you know I gotta give this a ten, not because I'm Columbian, but because I'm a werewolf'e.
on museheart is internationally published by scitz
9 Sep 2003, 12:25 PM
I wonder who she was going to recommend the already 'best poetry site' on the internet too? Perhaps her parrot? I tell you she must be a museheart because she sure isn't a museface. lol
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2003, 3:24 PM
A touch too thick, but then again this sort of poetry as always been a bit too bland in my book, but thank god I still can find uses for it outside of just writing, so here's a 7.
on (limits of ambition) by richa
9 Sep 2003, 10:55 AM
Last line could be "Should this go further." Otherwise, I'll have you know. I think it's very good. As always.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 11:51 PM
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on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 2:01 AM
Normally, homosexual poetry doesn't do me right, but I read this poem while listening to Ginsberg sing C'mon jack, and let me tell you? I laughed more than once. here's an eight.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 3:17 PM
Jesus, had kinky hair that spoke in tongues and whistles. But why is this an other? Let me guess? Because it's that different! Does your communications major come with a pack of world saving bubble gum? If it does, blow that up. I have a feeling your poetry is good enough to SAVE THE WORLD. YOU WILL BE THE VOICE OF THE MUTED THE EARS OF THE LEPERS THE MISSING DIGITS OF THE DEAF! THE CORN IN THE COB OF SWEET HOLY MARTYRDOM. YES YES!. It's just a shame this crock pot of crock was unreadable, and beyond poor tasting pretentious noodle stroodle.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 2:41 PM
It starts out well, but then tosses it. There are some interesting images here though, and some moments. The title however, is ridiculous. Why give the mystery of it all away? The title should set it up more symbolically cryptic and refined. For instance, call it "One sore nipple too many".
on hip hap pap by Garrett S Sexton
2 Sep 2003, 3:09 PM
Dip Dap pap smear (Free cued tipper) by What happened to my Jello?
Guy's a gag, an American gag
a great gag, a gay gag
a great, big, American, jay bird
I've got my fly on Guy
Why's my fly on Guy?
Well, Guy, that great, American jay
that greased, bag, jay bird
He has no teetheseses.
thereforing, he stealith my jello
still warm.
Guy's a gag, an American gag
a great gag, a gay gag
a great, big, American, jay bird
I've got my fly on Guy
Why's my fly on Guy?
Well, Guy, that great, American jay
that greased, bag, jay bird
He has no teetheseses.
thereforing, he stealith my jello
still warm.
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 4:24 PM
I love how you capitalise your "You's" wow, that's so avante garde. yr such a fucking heavy risk taker. I bet you even have unprotected barnyard sex with wild animals. I mean 'W'ild animals. Jesus help us all. Your poetry is so gosh darn Risky. Hack.
on Metrosexuality by LuckyJoe
19 Aug 2003, 10:42 PM
You are clearly not Gay, and are Lesbian oldlady tv land on Bravo. I can only give you a 6, and a pat on the Adam's strapple.
on some deleted poem
27 Aug 2003, 2:52 PM
I've done that lean.
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2003, 6:24 PM
What no chorus? Have you seen my bridges? they are well lit and engineered.