on reflexion - dayspring to dusk by DreamerSupreme
17 Sep 2003, 11:44 AM
Interestinely
on naive gazer by richa
16 Sep 2003, 10:52 PM
That's a swell fever blister.
on reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) by Don-Quixote
17 Sep 2003, 9:00 PM
One of your best. Tight, compact, significant. I'm proud of you.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 9:03 PM
If you lost the last line friend you would have a smoking gun, and I'd give you a ten instead of a nine.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2003, 9:23 PM
Quickbread, and well versed. you've hit a fine vein of ore. 10.
on Scorpion feet lucky rabbit by horus8
17 Sep 2003, 5:15 PM
Ha ha ha whoever gave this a blue five is a lesbian vegetarian albanian cock ring of fire, and I didn't fall into.
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2003, 6:59 PM
I think you should change "stop" to go, and all of your "yous" to stop.
on Cyber Junkie by J.B. Manning
16 Sep 2003, 11:01 PM
Yep, but pray tell? What if I sold my knees last week for twenty five quail eggs and an omellette named 'what was that whistle'?
on Manila by poetandknowit
16 Sep 2003, 8:21 PM
The End was a bit choppier for me than the rest, but I enjoyed it. 8.
on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2003, 11:08 PM
A fine piece. My only note would be, the part about the oak leaves. If you could change that tree and leaf to something more symbolic in nature of the Ocean than an Oak? You'd have a ten. 9.
on emblem esoterica by DreamerSupreme
21 Sep 2003, 9:52 AM
Ha ha, goooood one.
on Simple Can (Relic) by Liver by Shardik
21 Sep 2003, 9:51 AM
I read this first thing this morning, and laughed hard has hell. Then, I thought, hey wait a minute... I wrote this? And LAUGHED EVEN HARDER.
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2003, 1:11 PM
I liked it up until the point where i said "hey? I don't have a gap in my smile?!". then I became heated and jealous enough to go outside and piss in a garbage can. what if you called it "children of the cornhouse?"
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2003, 1:26 PM
yes, exactly
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2003, 1:30 PM
Keeps too.
on (fragment) by razorgrin
25 Sep 2003, 11:17 PM
God... I lost my load on tha... haaa 10 spheres until #2.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2003, 3:49 PM
No.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2003, 3:53 PM
Vivid.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2003, 3:57 PM
Bumble bee robot was a success! However, this poem is Parvo'd puppy shit twixt polio toes.
on The Light by the_unknown_angel83
25 Sep 2003, 3:59 PM
Sounds like a bad case of microwaved sodomy.