| Re: reflexion - dayspring to dusk by DreamerSupreme |
17-Sep-03/11:44 AM |
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| Re: naive gazer by richa |
16-Sep-03/10:52 PM |
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That's a swell fever blister.
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| Re: reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) by Don-Quixote |
17-Sep-03/9:00 PM |
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One of your best. Tight, compact, significant. I'm proud of you.
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17-Sep-03/9:03 PM |
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If you lost the last line friend you would have a smoking gun, and I'd give you a ten instead of a nine.
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17-Sep-03/9:23 PM |
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Quickbread, and well versed. you've hit a fine vein of ore. 10.
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| Re: Scorpion feet lucky rabbit by horus8 |
17-Sep-03/5:15 PM |
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Ha ha ha whoever gave this a blue five is a lesbian vegetarian albanian cock ring of fire, and I didn't fall into.
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16-Sep-03/6:59 PM |
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I think you should change "stop" to go, and all of your "yous" to stop.
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| Re: Cyber Junkie by J.B. Manning |
16-Sep-03/11:01 PM |
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Yep, but pray tell? What if I sold my knees last week for twenty five quail eggs and an omellette named 'what was that whistle'?
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| Re: Manila by poetandknowit |
16-Sep-03/8:21 PM |
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The End was a bit choppier for me than the rest, but I enjoyed it. 8.
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16-Sep-03/11:08 PM |
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A fine piece. My only note would be, the part about the oak leaves. If you could change that tree and leaf to something more symbolic in nature of the Ocean than an Oak? You'd have a ten. 9.
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| Re: emblem esoterica by DreamerSupreme |
21-Sep-03/9:52 AM |
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| Re: Simple Can (Relic) by Liver by Shardik |
21-Sep-03/9:51 AM |
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I read this first thing this morning, and laughed hard has hell. Then, I thought, hey wait a minute... I wrote this? And LAUGHED EVEN HARDER.
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24-Sep-03/1:11 PM |
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I liked it up until the point where i said "hey? I don't have a gap in my smile?!". then I became heated and jealous enough to go outside and piss in a garbage can. what if you called it "children of the cornhouse?"
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24-Sep-03/1:26 PM |
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24-Sep-03/1:30 PM |
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| Re: (fragment) by razorgrin |
25-Sep-03/11:17 PM |
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God... I lost my load on tha... haaa 10 spheres until #2.
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25-Sep-03/3:49 PM |
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25-Sep-03/3:53 PM |
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25-Sep-03/3:57 PM |
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Bumble bee robot was a success! However, this poem is Parvo'd puppy shit twixt polio toes.
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| Re: The Light by the_unknown_angel83 |
25-Sep-03/3:59 PM |
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Sounds like a bad case of microwaved sodomy.
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