on Conform by oldschool
26 Sep 2003, 12:41 PM
Woe.
on The man, the world by INTRANSIT
3 Oct 2003, 12:51 PM
ahaaahhaahahahah, feezus that was ahoot. 9.
on Intersection poetry by INTRANSIT
26 Sep 2003, 1:34 PM
I would give it a companion piece in another stanza the same size.
Like:
At the bottom
of the post, hops
A blind crow
Like:
At the bottom
of the post, hops
A blind crow
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 12:44 PM
Don't look at me. I give the Green Five!
on Life's Work by baughworm
26 Sep 2003, 12:42 PM
In the end it begins to show promise.
on >~{In the Shadow of a Crooked Ceiling}~< by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
26 Sep 2003, 12:50 PM
I loved how you confused star trek for starwars, and then later, them both, for Chud-Tron. lol
A couple of errors "No, more that a machine," than,
and there was another in there too. So here's a 9.
A couple of errors "No, more that a machine," than,
and there was another in there too. So here's a 9.
on AND A NICE CUP OF CHAR by Garrett S Sexton
26 Sep 2003, 12:55 PM
In New South Whales we head shoot our palfrey and grow are own thyme shrubbers. 5 fur the tittle
on swamp of devils by crwncka1
26 Sep 2003, 1:01 PM
This poem would be a perfect companion piece to the sound of a turd trying to pull itself back together the day after a relentlessly pounding rain storm.
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2003, 1:26 PM
Trend setter, I'm better, I whip my nose with the sheets of an overweight bed wetter.
on Ode to the Renesis by INTRANSIT
26 Sep 2003, 1:30 PM
Your time will arrive my friend. Sorry, about the Settle thing, he made me swear on the back of a square.
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2003, 1:39 PM
Ha ha ahh. I see you've made fine use of all of that time alone in that truck's cab.
on Wasted Words by ho_hum
27 Sep 2003, 12:30 PM
Except, the word of THE CRAFTY JESU!
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 11:37 AM
"If you look all the sponges" you'd need visine. 'took'.
Answer to 1 = It wouldn't be any "deeper" or 'denser' or shallower. it would be an ecological catastrophe.
#2 Light acrobatic Asians qand or levitating pariahs.
#3 Sign makers aren't intelligent enough to strike, not to mention there is no factory that makes signs, they're homemade 99% of the time the other 1% they are borrowed.
#4 as far back as you are currently
#5 Because you posted it on a site where people read poetry and other forms of writing to be read in return.
#6 Because I have no legs.
#7 Eating luckycharms and perhaps a bit of laundry before interviewing Gary Coleman.
#8 BECAUSE HE'S A BLACK MIDGET RUNNING FOR OFFICE.
here's a question for you?
Why do you keep shaving your chimpanzee and taking him for longwalks on cold days?
Answer: Because you are A Monkey abuser.
Answer to 1 = It wouldn't be any "deeper" or 'denser' or shallower. it would be an ecological catastrophe.
#2 Light acrobatic Asians qand or levitating pariahs.
#3 Sign makers aren't intelligent enough to strike, not to mention there is no factory that makes signs, they're homemade 99% of the time the other 1% they are borrowed.
#4 as far back as you are currently
#5 Because you posted it on a site where people read poetry and other forms of writing to be read in return.
#6 Because I have no legs.
#7 Eating luckycharms and perhaps a bit of laundry before interviewing Gary Coleman.
#8 BECAUSE HE'S A BLACK MIDGET RUNNING FOR OFFICE.
here's a question for you?
Why do you keep shaving your chimpanzee and taking him for longwalks on cold days?
Answer: Because you are A Monkey abuser.
on time's concubine by skaskowski
2 Oct 2003, 11:48 AM
So-So. I've seen better from you.
The last time I smelled a Temptation? he spun around splashing lukewarm jerry curl juice upon my naked buttocks. Naturally, I instantly climaxed in a heap of off Navy blue jelly and fuzzy toenail clipping pearljam to suck my thumb and coo. LIKE A REAL MAN in an unreal world full of hate and 7 elevens. I'm so sad so so damn sad *sniffle*.
on a rapid expenditure by skaskowski
2 Oct 2003, 12:02 PM
Surely.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 12:46 PM
Erm... And...For NO REASON! MUAHAHAHA AHKKDEERBLITHPUTY sorry i just inhaled my roaching cherry. Blahch.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 8:21 PM
I see you tossed the foundational piece that my parody was built around? Have no fear I'll never get rid of mine, and we'll always have that together my love.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 9:30 PM
on The Swallower (Oh brother!) by Spanish Devil by Bachus
7 Oct 2003, 6:29 PM
The sheer genius is in the kneading of the dough. Yeah, so what if I'm into getting my nails done? it's better then using my teeth.