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13 Oct 2003, 1:11 PM
A Sandnigger pigeon taking out my radiator.
on Not On Your Nelly by Wobble McFly
13 Oct 2003, 1:12 PM
This is charming.
on facku by J.B. Manning
9 Oct 2003, 10:55 AM
Do.
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2003, 6:56 PM
ha ha haaaAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME? ha haaa ha. try again, that motherfucking poem was more contrived then man on boy sex in the Vatican. Good grief and good riddance... caramel angels ha ha haaahhahah jesus fuckin'hairoweena i've seen it all now. 5.
on Primal Reality by peaceseeker
7 Oct 2003, 7:04 PM
my only critique would be it should be compressed by two. In other words each line should take on the line below it doubling each line but making the actual physical poem smaller by a half.
on Never Love A Poet by Caducus
9 Oct 2003, 9:27 AM
Robert Johnson's "Phonograph blues". (That's what I was listening to while just reading this). How are you? I missed you.
on Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss by Y2kSlamPoet
9 Oct 2003, 9:30 AM
"the day children killed Jesus's great grandson." I would drop this line altogether, and end at the line before it.
on B.F. by skaskowski
9 Oct 2003, 3:55 PM
Lai
on some deleted poem
9 Oct 2003, 4:17 PM
A tipper.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 12:16 PM
Unreadable rubbish.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 12:18 PM
Ha Ha ha!!!!! I gave this shit a zero it was at #8 on the best list and it went to #1?!!!!! Ahhhhhhh, that figures.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 12:21 PM
On a third reading, this is getting enjoyable.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 12:30 PM
"or will gunpowder thin, run with fire." I would end at 'thin' and put 'run with fire' somewhere deeper in the poem.
on Screw u all! by Blade
10 Oct 2003, 1:03 PM
Before you go... could you remove my penis from the worst list? It's been up there for over a year, see, and it's beginning to feel a slight draft.
on sex sex sex! by FreeFormFixation
10 Oct 2003, 1:34 PM
Some good poems today from you, congratulations. 9
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
10 Oct 2003, 8:02 PM
Artie? If and when you are done licking his comatose balls and changing his feeding straw... could you get out of the way, pass the salt. wipe off your faCE! AND SHUT THE FUCK UP!? Thanks!
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 8:06 PM
I would love you a lot more if you'd get off my foot.
on "I know what you need!" by A. Nomaly
10 Oct 2003, 9:37 PM
Touchinng the bottom of a lake with bare feet is the grossest thought imaginable.