on Everyday Implied But Never Declared by NewbieMe
22 Feb 2003, 12:40 PM
Congradulations! See, that wasn't so tough.
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2003, 4:00 PM
Then he ate her, and livingston's seagull went splash at mach ten.
on Fugly by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 1:52 PM
You know what's funny? Apparently i said the same thing over a month ago.
Why would you not fix that? It makes you look terribly retarded.
Why would you not fix that? It makes you look terribly retarded.
on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>
27 Feb 2003, 4:15 PM
I recieved the magazine today. It looks delightful. Thank you so much for everything. You are a true friend Z. and a great writer. I will give you my feedback perhaps later on the phone. Cute pictures. Very interesting blood line. Cheers.
on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
27 Feb 2003, 4:25 PM
"four calm winds" this part does not fit in the hospital. Try changing it to "clean white sheets".
on The Feild In Which I Live by Fear of Garbage
27 Feb 2003, 4:53 PM
Perhaps you swing pipe. though small and just an elbow joint with a little sodder and brazing... who knows, free plumbing. Your spelling of field is really worth the read though, i would imagine, right?
Wow, you would know. 9/11/01?
what will we do if the next attack comes on a date not so symbolically pleasing like say 7/11/03 Will you call that "fucking big gulp and two lotto ticket day with a pack of menthols please, Hadid?" Do us a favor, move to Iraq and hold the bullseye.
what will we do if the next attack comes on a date not so symbolically pleasing like say 7/11/03 Will you call that "fucking big gulp and two lotto ticket day with a pack of menthols please, Hadid?" Do us a favor, move to Iraq and hold the bullseye.
on Ode to Chicken Kiev by bunniesnangels
26 Feb 2003, 1:25 PM
Quite humorus.
on No future by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 1:42 PM
This one is called "Senior tongue lender".
Or,
" Fuck you Turkey, read the poeme"
Or,
"A poem you can pop".
Or,
" Fuck you Turkey, read the poeme"
Or,
"A poem you can pop".
on No future by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 1:44 PM
This is a bit more arc'd and much better then the other two, actually. that 's why i gave it a six.
on Fugly by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 1:50 PM
"I advise you take head in what I say, prepare". Okay, i'll take head? And an arm too? The word you were looking for is 'heed' As in heed your face it's not yours vulvanator.
Regardless of the fact that your 'subject and theme' is a bigwheel in the shadow of a harley (in theme terms). i felt your pain. here's a six.
Regardless of the fact that your 'subject and theme' is a bigwheel in the shadow of a harley (in theme terms). i felt your pain. here's a six.
on Guilt by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 1:32 PM
The title? "How to say absolutely nothing in 36 seconds."
on Escape is an Unaffordable luxury by Freethinker1602
26 Feb 2003, 1:36 PM
By the way in that last poem you began a sentence with "There fore" it's Therefore,. This one you should call "Great White fuckin' sucks""
on some deleted poem
26 Feb 2003, 10:33 AM
Yeah, junior colleges have eltistist propaganda programs too. Ceramics for the handicapped. (little johnny was blind, he thought he was making a fruit bowl, but it ended up being a rainbow glazed port a potty.) Now he has a patent and government contracts. They will be available and target this year and swap meets in about a decade.
on some deleted poem
26 Feb 2003, 2:08 PM
BECAUSE YOU ARE A FREAK MR. CHOADKE.
HOW ABOUT SPACE MOUNTAIN INSTEAD.0.Y
HOW ABOUT SPACE MOUNTAIN INSTEAD.0.Y
on some deleted poem
25 Feb 2003, 10:37 PM
But could you call it.
Michael Caine finger banged me at the matinee?
Michael Caine finger banged me at the matinee?
on some deleted poem
25 Feb 2003, 10:36 PM
Wow, now that's what pornography is missing on all kinds of levels. There area a few glitches here and there, but without those i don't believe this would be as good. Even god is flawed, by being at all.
Here's A SWAGGER AWARDE. best poem i think i've read this week, easily.
Here's A SWAGGER AWARDE. best poem i think i've read this week, easily.
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2003, 3:40 PM
And we hope you eventually read Voltaires "Candid", and it makes you rape your own ass with a polo mallet and pam spray on cooking grease at 375 degrees until crispy on the outside and off pink on the inside. Perhaps you should take your mouth off of your mutha's udder for a sec and squirt your name in the grass? Just don't carve in the tree bark, please. Trees have feelings asshole.
on The Fate of the Gilt by OneFingerAnswer
26 Feb 2003, 1:22 PM
Stylus.
on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>
27 Feb 2003, 3:58 PM
Horns a velvet.