on two poles are better than one by <~>
27 Nov 2002, 10:14 AM
yep. that's the one.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 8:07 PM
i wont vote because i dont know who in the fuck you're talking about?! and frankly...i refuse to.
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 12:42 PM
congradulations. a wonderfull and warmingly simple piece..celebrating the relationship between the cat lover and his/her loved felines backyard explorations.
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 9:44 PM
Sir who? exactly.
lose the excess question marks.
well you were right about one thing.
it is an ode.
i guess you had to be there though huh.? i will wait to vote on this.
perhaps forever. why you might ask? because DAMN IT MAN! no eye drowning is aloud..ha lol just fucking with you. here's a six..i'll read your others it can only get better...your rhyming pattern was almost cool though. see you at your other poems..
lose the excess question marks.
well you were right about one thing.
it is an ode.
i guess you had to be there though huh.? i will wait to vote on this.
perhaps forever. why you might ask? because DAMN IT MAN! no eye drowning is aloud..ha lol just fucking with you. here's a six..i'll read your others it can only get better...your rhyming pattern was almost cool though. see you at your other poems..
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 5:02 PM
finally a rope swing that lets me get a little wet i bet. 9.
on Reptiles & Dust - Twenty-two through Forty-two by Wulf
4 Dec 2002, 6:28 PM
simply to live and know, i hope i don't return...i hope there is no heaven...only sleep void of form or thought. some divine knowings here, accompanied by radom pot shots also...bit too long, but i say that in knowing that it can and will go forever.8
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 6:34 PM
the lost two sentences really lick the envelope, but the whole piece was only a seven up until that point...the title is also ..boring and thrown.8.
on The Magician by Hooman
2 Dec 2002, 11:27 PM
anyone that can sit and find an opinion on that many differentiating labels deserves atleast an 8. whether i agree with what was contrasted or not.
on Once upon a Christmas Eve by exoticwriter
29 Nov 2002, 6:52 PM
you'd have better luck dissassembeling a nuke with a flipper and a ferret. it was real pretty though.7.
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 8:39 PM
the first movie jack nicholson made was the terror....check it out. ghost story during napoleons days..also starring boris carloff before he died....made in 62. i think or maybe 66.
on A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun
29 Nov 2002, 9:09 PM
ninth sentence? the term is pecking...freak. and the white kids that try to act black are called wiggers.
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 9:16 PM
might be more effective if you say, "i can only listen to it instead." still great regardless..9.w
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 2:41 PM
straight razor cuts from top knuckle to middle knuckle..place fingers over and bleed into bowl...then sit at the table. bowl bleeding from both hands...get naked, put your face into the bowl on your left, your right nipple in the one on your right, and then palm print your entire body...now you're ready to kiss grandma. and got to battle, unless of course you don't have the inner workings for that more passionate approach. child.
on No One Cares by Quarton
29 Nov 2002, 3:06 AM
second stanza, second line typo...pealing church bells is big with me though....have a 9.
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2002, 6:52 PM
i must say..this is a frisky kitten. 9.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 8:08 PM
alright. here's an 8 because i know a good shower cam when i see one.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 8:18 PM
more people will read you if you change your name to "cuddly polarbear stuffer" honest.
on Wedding Announcement by A. Nomaly
29 Nov 2002, 8:25 PM
general hospital is my least favorite show..
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 4:48 PM
spectacular title...light metal. 8. i would be more sold if it ended at kneel the shore.