on Liar by Goose
25 Nov 2002, 6:04 PM
shhhhh. 9.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 2:09 PM
almost a rye for the catcher. poindexter.8.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 2:14 PM
what? are your mirrors still on strike? remember what happened to "stubby" or was it "stumpy" in tremors? he died a horrible death. he exploded. here> have a ten! i think you deserve it.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 2:18 PM
oddly charming. BUT NOT HAUNTING ENOUGH! just kidding. try the wheel of fifths.
on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria
25 Nov 2002, 5:19 PM
if you're left handed..why write with your right?.the problem with puberty? pre-sense of humor, and in all honesty teens go to the movies to finger bang third cousins and lower class man and then let their friends digit smell. in other words farting is not aloud stinky.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 5:44 PM
if you think you're clue-ing someone in..the jokes on you.
on Irony by w~* ATHENA *~w
25 Nov 2002, 5:48 PM
"die-anetics" but volcanoes and lava are so symbolic. point. show them how you control the volcanic side of yourself and they'll buy your book, or die trying..have an eight cuz i haven't.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 7:36 PM
so what? still gonna say you're seventeen, and insult my fucking intelligence. if so i will lose all respect for your abillity to write such impressive poetry for your generation, because this is not the poetry of your peers it looks like oil in water. i dare you to have a seventeen year old decipher the layers of this poem to you on a level of maturity that the poem represents...oil and water..you are a horrible liar.
on Maliced flame by T'ien
25 Nov 2002, 7:58 PM
was it reall neccesary to go with that name. it makes it completely impossible to take anything you write seriously or give a shit. that's why i don't.0.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 1:00 PM
you're wrong...right now as we speak there are a bunch of kindred dick-weigh-ors reading the cobain journals saying geez...he liked jellied skin..so than shall -eye-
it really is an over analyzed reference to amoeba and ancient oceans critters that we evolved from before the angels came and fucked neaNDERTHALLS! SO? take your jelly and spread it thin....i'm still not impressed, in fact i'm still half asleep. dullards.
it really is an over analyzed reference to amoeba and ancient oceans critters that we evolved from before the angels came and fucked neaNDERTHALLS! SO? take your jelly and spread it thin....i'm still not impressed, in fact i'm still half asleep. dullards.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 12:50 PM
something happens with the last four lines that causes me to almost dislike this powerfull piece. could i do a re-edit for you? if so let me know. it's a shame to see a good movie throw it for no reason in the third act. here's a 6.
on The North Wind by Ranger
25 Nov 2002, 12:53 PM
i've just seen all your cards.
on some deleted poem
23 Nov 2002, 1:37 PM
rowlings is weak, but you're not.
on some deleted poem
22 Nov 2002, 12:08 PM
GGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAA
on Metaphysical Haiku by Idaho
22 Nov 2002, 12:30 PM
this is exemplirary work to the tenth degree. 10.h
on Just Die Already... by loneshadow29
21 Nov 2002, 12:33 PM
you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
on the devil in you by ciantu
21 Nov 2002, 10:24 PM
Bastard is spelled this way BASS-TURD! and i prefer to be called James. thanks.
on Parking Lot by uncannydanny
21 Nov 2002, 10:35 PM
the material involved in this piece is definitely savory, but the ??? shit has to go danny..if you fix it i'll give you an eight just for the false teeth and wig jettison.
on Night-mare by INTRANSIT
20 Nov 2002, 8:04 PM
i once stole a mannequin.