on cold sonnet by <~>
10 Dec 2002, 7:10 PM
like fishing in the bering strait for eel.
on Xmas gifts list by lunar
10 Dec 2002, 7:06 PM
there's nothing wrong with this poem. i assume the pros are being critical since most have forgotten why they even began to write poetry. it must have been to keep one's nose from dipping into one's beer.
replying on Bilboards, and music, just shouldn't be mixed. by Bachus
10 Dec 2002, 6:56 PM
precisely. sort of like being have in the bag, but knowing exactly what you want and were you are going in the moment.
on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT
10 Dec 2002, 11:23 AM
A SWAGGERIAN BACHIANUS AWARDETH THIS DAY I DOTH DECREE UPON THEE! 10.
replying on Bilboards, and music, just shouldn't be mixed. by Bachus
10 Dec 2002, 11:20 AM
AN APPEALING SWAGGER MOST LIKELY.
replying on Of the opposition. Zipcode graffitti by Bachus
10 Dec 2002, 11:17 AM
fascinating...can you tell me what's in my other hand. perhaps some malcolm x, and whitman? nay nay..it is only a crow feathered foot, and a box of mr. bubbles.
on where the stories breathe by JasonandAlexis
9 Dec 2002, 10:03 PM
jason, is it? i'll have to mark that down as evidence.i
on Superhuman - Nature - Hero by royalflesh
9 Dec 2002, 9:47 PM
a surreal embrace, one cannot just waste. hold it high and do a jig. for the bark, the tree, the fig!
on Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum
9 Dec 2002, 4:35 PM
sheer evil. i will go now and count my pennies. i have no thoughts, BUT I STILL HAVE THE STAFF OF RELIEF! it would be funny if we could get christopher walken to read it..wow the image is nucleur. have a 9.
on Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford
9 Dec 2002, 4:23 PM
tell that to sir paul's wife! ha!
on The Yellow Penguin by ahmyerda
9 Dec 2002, 4:21 PM
oh come on. don't exaggerate..."would you care for one waifer thin mint".
on Happy Cancer! by Agemo-Z
8 Dec 2002, 4:56 PM
and here i only lost a breast and half of my asshole. shame really. straw sucking the love canal left me with a canal, banal.
replying on edgar a's raven by Garrett S Sexton
8 Dec 2002, 12:17 PM
i happen to be president of the bastards club, and demand to see your red peter badge of bastardry.
on The Spankbox by Garrett S Sexton
8 Dec 2002, 12:15 PM
great title. too bad nobody cares.
replying on The Spankbox by Garrett S Sexton
8 Dec 2002, 12:14 PM
shut up!
on Society by Garrett S Sexton
8 Dec 2002, 12:13 PM
YEAH! LET'S NOT CONFUSE vulgarity with art...let's see her my friend, horus8 gave you an ten?, see, he's a sucker for doctors and leather and bad form unfortunately..i'm not. however i am the jeese james of the seven-eleven roll over craze..i think you need to check your stats.
on A BACHUS MAN A MANY by Garrett S Sexton
8 Dec 2002, 12:08 PM
Quit looking in the mirror, yurn around. i'm behind you in the window. blade. then again i heard you had a good voice..perhap we'llcall you sade..yes sade it is...where's my precious we wants it we needs it GIVES ITS TO US!
on Osmosis on Parade by David
7 Dec 2002, 5:58 PM
sound like how i got good at everything i do too...and why they call your left hand mr. kalamazoo.