on The Ode that never was by Shardik
29 Jul 2008, 3:06 AM
suspension of disbelief cancelled... in a bad way.
on rainfall saga 7 by Bill Z Bub
19 Aug 2008, 8:14 PM
sounds like rain to me, i like it
on The Drive In (Drugs broke her, she broke me) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Jul 2008, 3:10 AM
you make me reflect and regret upon all the long stuff i've ever written
on Childhood Memories by Jessina
29 Jul 2008, 2:06 AM
i like the concrete jungle's tie-in with life's musical jingle, either way you're caught
on Before The Sun by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Jul 2008, 2:09 AM
If you're too drunk to play guitar, it's okay to play the catatonic scale...
downward strum and a blank face
downward strum and a blank face
on EVADING THE FLESH by daggatolar
29 Jul 2008, 2:11 AM
you forgot about sporks... gouging out eyes is way too easy, though, right...?
on S.O.S. by amanda_dcosta
29 Jul 2008, 2:12 AM
is me actually commenting on this your first radio signal? sorry...
on Blood Plush by Kamikaze
29 Jul 2008, 2:14 AM
oh, god... this reminds me of when my dad used to buy and sell those things... i must have eaten 100 microwaved happy meals...
on a 9,000.00$ Philippine script treatment by Shardik
29 Jul 2008, 2:16 AM
too much... too little attention span... but props on the good intro
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2008, 2:17 AM
he wrote it already. no sequel necessary.
on I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik
29 Jul 2008, 2:19 AM
i never got a flower for my b-day, and somehow, my dad was never offended...
on Cancer (Lyric) by Twiggy by Shardik
29 Jul 2008, 2:20 AM
lame (no pun intended)
on Today is another day by Prince of Void
29 Jul 2008, 2:55 AM
if you're happy from point a to b, as you've defined here, then you're good to go my friend
on Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Jul 2008, 2:56 AM
lobotamy?
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2008, 3:00 AM
i like wires and grass tied together. Very concrete.
i think your last two lines were unecessary
i think your last two lines were unecessary
on Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik
29 Jul 2008, 3:02 AM
i dont know if i want to be taken there.
on Spuna by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Jul 2008, 3:03 AM
eh
on If I can't swim there I'll float by <{Baba^Yaga}>
29 Jul 2008, 3:04 AM
eh
on regret by FreeFormFixation
13 Jan 2006, 3:15 AM
read this in a hurried manner.