on Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense...
30 Jul 2002, 4:31 PM
I truly appreciate the critque Horus.
Good lookin', and stay up.
Da1
Good lookin', and stay up.
Da1
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 3:57 PM
Thats deep...
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 6:20 PM
this is hardly a poem let alone even a justifiable stanza.
and what exactly is your angle?!?
And you would specific definitions in a Dictionary as oppose to a Thesaurus, JUST A THOUGHT
and what exactly is your angle?!?
And you would specific definitions in a Dictionary as oppose to a Thesaurus, JUST A THOUGHT
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 6:39 PM
I truly am sorry..
my condolences to the family
my condolences to the family
on Her Wildfire Addiction by molly
30 Jul 2002, 6:43 PM
A bleeding heart,
is the spark
of this worlds retribution from the dark...
Keep caring girl, Da1....
is the spark
of this worlds retribution from the dark...
Keep caring girl, Da1....
on Compassion by Kashi
30 Jul 2002, 5:11 PM
it makes you think, but in my opinion( if itmatters at all) it needs more poess and exclusiveness. in other words, " it would be better if the beginning line was developed possibly or if there was more of a revelation in its conclusion, like I've gathered you were shooting for.. anywayz, maybe both would help.
just a though, Da1.and feel free to disect in contrivence over my work, i would be honored.
just a though, Da1.and feel free to disect in contrivence over my work, i would be honored.
on liberation by silentcat
30 Jul 2002, 4:03 PM
GONE HEAD WICHA SELF...
I need a cigarette..
kEEP IT SAUCY GIRL, ONE