on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2004, 7:54 PM
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on featherlight hands by darkshark
10 Aug 2004, 9:59 PM
Great description, only thing I'm not sure about is the line breaks.
on A fish, or what's left of one by phbiscuit
10 Aug 2004, 9:57 PM
Nice, I've been playing around with a poem that has a similar theme to this. =-)
on Innocence by QuirkyWonder
2 Aug 2004, 8:56 PM
Lovely! Great visual poem! Way to paint a picture with words! =-)
on Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717
2 Aug 2004, 8:53 PM
Nice rhythm. If I may ask, is there a reason "lie" is not capitalized? Typo? Just curious.
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on Certain circles by INTRANSIT
9 Aug 2004, 9:43 AM
Loved this line: "The brother who breathes the color red from the gold filled barn to the American flag."
Very nice!
Very nice!
on Promises by blueiris1261
17 Nov 2003, 2:01 PM
Nice acrosstic (spell?) poem!
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2003, 2:04 PM
Very nice; can picture the scene well.
on She wishes by INTRANSIT
18 Nov 2003, 8:01 PM
Superb short (poem, that is)!
on I don't like fish by INTRANSIT
18 Nov 2003, 8:05 PM
With the title, I was partly expecting a Dr. Seuss poem. Cute joke poem!
on The Mystery of My Bobble Headed Doll by CouchPotato
21 Nov 2003, 7:30 AM
Can visualize the scene very well. Good job! =D