on arise by daniella
4 Nov 2002, 2:35 PM
i love the last stanza, a familiar melancholia. You reminded me of something long forgotten, I will go and post it now.
on fading by PunchMeInTheFace
4 Nov 2002, 2:25 PM
I don't understand the title. Nothing here seems to be fading. Read your other 2, and I get the feeling your not jumping in. Just wandering around the perimeter. This is the strongest and most invested of the 3. I especially can relate to the last 2 lines, but somehow the last line feels overly dramatic in a cheesy sort of way.
on Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus
30 Oct 2002, 8:40 AM
Beautiful.
on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones
30 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM
Lovely.
on Consider The Dead by Bonehiss
30 Oct 2002, 8:34 AM
I don't dislike this poem, but it get's very cliche.
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:21 AM
Well now I'm definitely not excited. You've burst my fantasy bubble. And anyway, if you all were so scintillating then we'd never get down to business. I like a pretty lout every once in a while. They've no need for talk.
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:13 AM
You've got lots of brothers. Now why does that excite me?
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:12 AM
You must be getting your period.
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:06 AM
I meant "visualizing".
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:05 AM
Now that's a funny story. I've been visually your brother as robust and healthy. I hope he's well.
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:04 AM
Terrific, but why do you add all that sweet stuff to it?
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 7:59 AM
Prententiously expensive you mean. Along with the barleywine. My boyfriend made beer 4 years ago. Best beer I ever tasted. I think I'll try my hand at it.
on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 7:54 AM
I thought this poem was about "On the waterfront". Works for me.
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
30 Oct 2002, 7:37 AM
Oh come on, it made you laugh, didn't it? Just a little?
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
29 Oct 2002, 11:29 PM
Oh baby, I'd like to simulate your computer. Bring Occam along. We can use his razor to shave each others eyebrows.
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
29 Oct 2002, 3:42 PM
Black as the blackest heart.
on A love of the midlands by ==Doylum
29 Oct 2002, 3:27 PM
Good God ==Doylum, are you ok?! Stand too close to the metro? I heard if someone has wings only on their right side it means they're gay. Is that true, or just a celestial legend? Must be a legend. I mean you don't have any parts right? But wait you told me you used to frabble to the tunes of Ms. Amos. What's going on? You have some explaining to do. Those wings are phony aren't they. Wing implants, humpf. When are you lads going to learn to love yourselves for who you are? You make baby Jesus cry.
on A Story Book Tale by brazen
28 Oct 2002, 8:02 AM
What are you talking about? Love always lies, well it manipulates things anyway.
replying on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl
28 Oct 2002, 7:55 AM
Captain Howdy is the titled used, by the demon in The Exorcist, to talk with Linda Blair throught the ouija board. He lives in the attic.