on i am on the carpet by silvertongueddevil
19 Aug 2002, 10:47 PM
yes, this works really well when read fast and rambling - took me a few reads to get the cadence right, but yes, I've got it! 7/10
on would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil
19 Aug 2002, 10:26 PM
Not at all crazy in my opinion, but I'm sure the poor girl has long since run screaming from your obsessive clutches. 8/10
on To You, In Warmer Climes by <~>
19 Aug 2002, 7:59 PM
oh! so glad for the rewrite, as I missed this the first time around. So much here, so much, it makes me tingly. 10/10
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
19 Aug 2002, 7:01 PM
Damn! I like it. Hunny? Is that you? 7/10
on Pi'd Piper by [mojo]
18 Aug 2002, 4:51 PM
I must admit his tune has charmed me more times than I can remember. Really excellent. 10/10
on Arachnid by quantumenterprises
18 Aug 2002, 11:45 AM
Snappy rhythm and jolly good fun + I love spiders too. 9/10
on Thornapple the Babyfat by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Aug 2002, 10:32 AM
8/10 I'd like to hear it with the music.
on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
17 Aug 2002, 1:07 PM
i all sew sport publik edekashun, butt alls she need is luv! I'm really just mystified that mystifying is spelled correctly. It's a mystery, a riddle, wrapped in an enigma. I think 'tears beyond hope' deserves a 'poetry beyond hope' award. Oh, this is getting ugly, I must quickly drain a beer now.
on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
17 Aug 2002, 12:31 PM
Just perusing the Worst section for some giggles (thanks WFW & DA), and came across this literary masterpiece. I don't make a habit of commenting on pieces like this one, but I must say that this truly made me weep. 1/10 for the consistent usage of one of my all-time favorite words, 'alls'.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
17 Aug 2002, 10:32 AM
P&K, I wouldn't concern myself too much about the poor fella; the occasional basal cell has become a badge of honor for those happy golfer republican types. And I'd ask you to kindly keep my big hills out of this.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
17 Aug 2002, 9:49 AM
To P&K, one eventually becomes accustomed to the lack of oxygen up here. You will soon begin operating on a new and exciting level of consciousness. 6/10 for the lovely tribute. mama mia.
on Exquisite Explosion by Venus
16 Aug 2002, 3:24 PM
A coming thunderstorm will work if you like, but think of it on a more erotic level...
on Thorns by poetandknowit
16 Aug 2002, 12:10 PM
Was it really supposed to be a secret? The dual identity of Horus8? One only has to check out the MP3 to see that Bachus is an alter ego. You gypsy rogue you!