on Despair by Caducus
5 Feb 2003, 3:09 PM
i am almost convinced that PAKI invented teen14 to praise this poem after saying no one over 16 would....hmm. mystery.
on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos
3 Feb 2003, 10:53 PM
you recieve a 5, but only because of priest holmes. i like the chiefs.
on While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>
6 Feb 2003, 6:35 AM
snake bite eh? don't make me suck out anything...
on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
4 Feb 2003, 2:50 PM
i didn't even realize that these were all seperate haikus...i should really start paying attention to...eh, huh?
on throw-away by mindsigns
6 Feb 2003, 6:48 AM
don't forget that ugly lamp from 1972. i don't even think it has a switch on it...
on **The Therapist** by scitz
6 Feb 2003, 6:46 AM
very nice, except i'll fight you about the moral of the story. feelings should not and are utterly impossible to keep locked up or secret. they project from you in every way and from every orifice...unless you have none. remember, a blocked pipe will explode from the pressure.
on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum
4 Feb 2003, 2:43 PM
most notable correction i have to make is to change 'coal' to 'lead', for i'm sure it was a reference to the alchemy in the stanza before it, and alchemy was originally the science of changing lead to gold. i'll leave any other errors to the ranking public
on The cross roads by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Feb 2003, 6:42 AM
i always meet the strangest people at the fair. families with no forking...creepy hairy things too.
on Star Bright by x311
6 Feb 2003, 6:38 AM
make a good song...nice kinda feel to it.
first 6 lines read quickly, but from there it seems to slack off. understandable. you probably had a few good lines you wanted to work with and then had to force the rest out to finish. if not, i do that a lot, so i'll just go back to being alone with my stuffed animals
on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Feb 2003, 2:36 PM
lrig a mi eehet ekil
like tehee i'm a girl...sadly though, no stereotypical valley girl in middle school or high school EVER seemed to figure it out. what good is genius if no one understands it?
like tehee i'm a girl...sadly though, no stereotypical valley girl in middle school or high school EVER seemed to figure it out. what good is genius if no one understands it?
on Mississipi Murder by scitz
3 Feb 2003, 10:46 PM
you seem to have a talent for exposing the dramatically depressing side of american history...about damn time.
on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz
3 Feb 2003, 10:43 PM
wow, you should work for the army. you'd make a fine recruiter...
on A meeting at Maverick, then dinner. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
6 Feb 2003, 6:31 AM
see, my personal fear would be to sign over my work only to later here it coming from the voice of the latest bubblegum-popper. i would then carbomb the building they were in...
on some deleted poem
5 Feb 2003, 4:49 PM
how many times can someone say "beautiful". seriously, your testing my limits...
on The poemranker desk by lunar
5 Feb 2003, 2:49 AM
time and effort...also seems to have successfully brought out all the stars. good job moon.
on Xmas gifts list by lunar
5 Feb 2003, 2:44 AM
my ass hurts from reading all these comments...thank god i don't have a life.
on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer
6 Feb 2003, 6:49 AM
phoenix...favorite bird. the only one i know that won't shit on my car. here, have a 9.
on The Dark one's 2000th comment by <{Baba^Yaga}>
6 Feb 2003, 6:33 AM
i usually laugh AFTER breaking wind.