on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum
12 Dec 2002, 6:27 PM
Fly where?
on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
17 Dec 2002, 2:18 PM
Why the question. Figure it out yourself.
on flying home by daniella
17 Dec 2002, 7:43 PM
Some nice lines.
on Is It Love by angel_uy
17 Dec 2002, 7:44 PM
I just read this, but it was called "Trust."
on Mind of War by t_t_redhot
17 Dec 2002, 7:47 PM
I think you are trying to be deep here for your own good. This sounds like a good Stan Rice poem. But that just will not do. Maybe try to calm the images a bit.
on some deleted poem
17 Dec 2002, 3:01 PM
This is a statement not a haiku. And it is McDonald's not Mac. And they just posted their first quarterly loss in the history of the universe. People must be going to Boston Chicken to get a load of H0's girlfriend.
on some deleted poem
17 Dec 2002, 3:11 PM
Jackson Browne already wrote this song with much better lyrics.
on Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 2:06 AM
Really, 9/10. Who? Why? Seriously. this is shit. It will be shit in 100 years. Trust me.
on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 1:05 AM
Here is my attempt to track down your crappy poems and make a comment, which I have avoided at all costs in the past. Well, you have Intransit, who would give a pile of shit a 10 loving this and Athena, the plagiarist (or is it you) digging it, and Christof (the best poet on this site) well he was dazed and thinking of New Zealand, because it is shit. Just like all the other poem you write.
on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8
16 Dec 2002, 11:28 PM
This is a true and visionary piece of work. You must submit this to the Paris Review at once. Just where Stan Rice has published. hahahahahahhahhaahhaha
on Icarus Down by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 12:09 AM
More shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But genius!!!!!!!!!!!!
on some deleted poem
17 Dec 2002, 12:01 AM
This is by far not your best. But hey, that visionary H8 (my girl makes USD8 an hour, but I love her so) likes it, so be it. I shall not vote.
on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 12:08 AM
But it is all of us that are missing the point. In 100 years this will be the pinnacle of art. haahahahhahaha
on Icarus Down by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 12:13 AM
Whoever gave this a 10 was in need of either a GED or just completely drunk. Have not we established that this fictional character cannot write.!!!!! It is not worthy of more than a zero. I would give it less, but I am limited see, by nentwhistle. We need minus #s.
on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 8:56 PM
Besides the clear fact that this poem is on the immature side why does it end with By: Shawn Aronson? I think you should come up with a better ending because this confuses the reader greatly.
on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum
12 Dec 2002, 6:29 PM
I can see flying to bingo, but wisdom and retirement. That is stretching it. But then maybe you mean to the midlands or to the place where kitty went.
on some deleted poem
17 Dec 2002, 6:29 PM
What is the point of this?
on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT
15 Dec 2002, 6:23 PM
This sucks.
on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 12:06 AM
A work of visionary genius. You need to submit this at once, just to show us you are the POLLACK OF Poetry. HAHAHAHAHA. Stan Rice. Really. you suck as a writer. hahahahahahaha