on The way they used to be by Sugarbbybuttrfly
6 Dec 2002, 9:59 PM
Pimple poem deluxe.
on Like a Father by confuzdlilgirl
6 Dec 2002, 9:56 PM
Is this person in jail?
on Sense of drpression by Sugarbbybuttrfly
6 Dec 2002, 9:51 PM
What does "cuz" mean? Pimple poem.
on Happy Cancer! by Agemo-Z
6 Dec 2002, 8:53 PM
Thank you ever so much for making this the ninth poem written in honor of my work here. I believe that officially takes the cake. It is amazing the depths one will sink to show the lack of integrity.
on idiots by w~* ATHENA *~w
6 Dec 2002, 8:47 AM
Do you ever write anything yourself or have you simply developed a keen ability to cut and paste.
replying on Poem For Times Such As These by Nicholas Jones
6 Dec 2002, 8:38 AM
Well if that was the intent then congratulations you succeed, but I am still not sure that is a good thing.
replying on Poem For Times Such As These by Nicholas Jones
6 Dec 2002, 8:36 AM
I would not call free verse revolutionary. It was a natural progression from the narrative structure and when it finally came about as a more comfortable mode of poetry the world of art was ensconced in so many wild changes the it slipped right in. I'd say free verse opened up more specifics in content, which allowed subjects to be openly dealt with and easier for the common reader to understand, and this might have had a revolutionary effect as bringing poetry to the peasant, but again the nature of the form was already coming around.
replying on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin
4 Dec 2002, 1:08 PM
You still find the time to show up. Are the others (Tint and Limonade)cramming and you are truly a wizard.
How long did this take to write? And exactly what are you shooting for? Reaction? Abstraction? Realism? Surrealism? Warholism? Gymnasium? Is this the individual proletariats response to oppression in the work place? A response to a bar rejection? A failing grade? What do you mean. Do you want to start a revolution? Or are you just a young boy with nothing better to do and loads suburban angst?
replying on the girl what gave scott the look by UAFANTHORPEY
4 Dec 2002, 11:25 AM
Pardon me for sounding so serious. However, my comment was truly meant in laughable jest. Complete and utter sarcasm in the kindest sense. I find UAFANTHORPEY and his peeps quite amusing.
on just another punk song by darby pyn
4 Dec 2002, 9:12 AM
In this effort are you confusing punk song with say, hardcore song (you youngsters always seem to confuse the two),? Based on the words etched in blue I would vote the latter. If so, are you suggesting, or at least inferring by the chosen title, that all of these songs song alike or are attempting to affect the listener the same way?
on want of warmth by <~>
4 Dec 2002, 8:48 AM
why this type of line breaking for the haiku?
on the girl what gave scott the look by UAFANTHORPEY
4 Dec 2002, 8:40 AM
I just love the hardcore English gangsta poems. It makes me want to explore further the mean streets of the criminal metropolis we call London.
replying on the girl what gave scott the look by UAFANTHORPEY
4 Dec 2002, 8:37 AM
What, when you were 14?
replying on want of warmth by <~>
4 Dec 2002, 8:35 AM
What does "pah" mean? I am at a loss when it comes to the spelling of verbal utterances.
replying on nothing, as today by <~>
4 Dec 2002, 8:34 AM
If it were a pimple poem it would have simple words like moon, wonderful, lover, heart and lots of ...s. Maybe you should put it in an octagon.
on Tribute by UAFANTHORPEY
4 Dec 2002, 8:30 AM
Is this like the poetic version of the Tenacious D song "Tribute"?
on nothing, as today by <~>
4 Dec 2002, 7:57 AM
I am not the fan 1) of what if poems and 2) questions in poems. The questions are what we ask ourselves to get to the point of some sort of answer or resolution, which is the poem. But that is only my opinion. Intransit gave you a big score and he is obviously the general audience.
replying on The Black Cottage by w~* ATHENA *~w
4 Dec 2002, 7:46 AM
Now I see the hat hare poet be me to the punch again. Geez. An early riser? Or is MST my crutch!
on I Am A Poor Little Boy In The Land Of Love by sweetzephyr
4 Dec 2002, 7:23 AM
Are you really from Nepal? Living there now?