at the risk of receiving further emotional suffering, i admit that line was a typo and should've read "my tendons tear apart".

i would edit the poem, but i would lose all my previous votes.

>_>

actually, i got the highest grade in the class. i know, i know. i pity the rest of the graduates, as well

ouchies. i have been slammed and thusly know when to quit.

but just out of curiosity, why do you prowl this place only to tell people they'll never be as good of a writer as yourself?

XD

man... and to think, i haven't posted anything on here in years! i see it's still filled with the same people who think they really knoew the difference between art and trash.

i'm sorry i've ever doubted any of you. i'll go crawl under my bed while you continue to blast my musings with slams you'd probably never have the balls to say to anyone in real life :)

hahaha... BURN!

this kicks major booty dude... more than stephen's fat ass

IT MEANS NON-SHINY you dumbass

yay, my humanoid characteristic program is working!

hahaha... no, for one of your computer classes, we were assigned to write creative stories to "pitch" as a storybook idea... so yeah, it made sense at the time.

eh... it has nothing to do with deep meanings, i got bored during school and wrote it in 3 days in a free hour i had... i (along with a friend) later wrote a prequel story to it for a class project

oh, and things can be "dulled" without be "non-sharp"

would you like it more if i threw in an apearance by Spongebob?

oooh... tea!... wait, erect... WHA?

*has impure thoughts*

XD

*claps* okay, i admit Hank in Montana was funny... you salty son of a gun ;)

heh, i guess people like thinking before they sleep :P

HAHAHAHAHA... omg, you are so funny!

A: interesting how you get your kicks off of "trying" to make yourself seem better than others, even though you obviously are lacking in many personal fields

B: you're the only person who repeatedly tries to find fault with me

C: why haven't you posted anything bad about my newest poem "what's the point?" or does it leave you without possible "witty retort"?

D: i seriously didn't think you'd take it that hard when i said you didn't pass the 4th grade... maybe it just took you more than one try... but at any rate, i'm sorry i hurt your feelings

so you need to be whiny to prove a point?... who really cares?... i wrote it, so why don't you shut the hell up?

luckily, i was revived by the EMS crew on the way to the hospital...

i actually was thinking about making this into a sort of non-rhyming song like Sting's "fields of gold".... but i have yet to come up with a tune for it :\

wow, sounds like you've had this happen to you before...