A bit wordy for my taste, but still not too shabby.

You've always got a positive message. ;0)

hogwash? really? For some reason, I tink that word takes away from it...but thats just me. The rest is good though.

Sad when this sort of thing happens.

...roads must a man walk down, before you can call him a man?
...licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop?

a little too...I don't know...Hallmarky for me..

So true.

very old-school.

Very pretty. Grows a bit stale in a couple of spots and there are some forced rhymes, but overall I like it. Been a while since I've seen you on here. Welcome back.

Wonder why she doesn't like blind dates...

The bottom line is that smoking is cool and you know it. If you damn nonsmokers would take the time to learn how to smoke, you'd realize how good it really is.

In all seriousness, though, it's not a bad poem but you really need to spell check it.

This reminds me of Fight Club. Not bad. I think some of the lines could be cut out to make a tighter package and I'm not sure about the word smelt but overall, not bad.

A spiral in phi? I like the sentiment behind it, but I'm just not feelin' this one D.

I like it.

Naughty, which is kind of nice. I think though, that this kind of thing is better said with a less graphic tone. Not that I'm trying to say that i'm offended or anything. I just think it would be a better poem for it.

I rather like "They make me glad". Pure simplicity. Thats the way I like it.

The good thing about trees is that you can grow more. What'll they think of next?

I keep thinking of Peter Gabriel with this one. Maybe a different title and lessening the repetition of "in your eyes" would help.

I like it but I
d actually like to see a little more.

I was wondering where you've been.