on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2004, 8:49 PM
very passionate
on some deleted poem
19 Feb 2004, 7:49 PM
This would make a beautiful alt-country song.
I tried it out on guitar and it sounds good with a few minor tweaks for the flow, namely in the chorus...
i.e. - I never liked the rain as much as you (-did)
I tried it out on guitar and it sounds good with a few minor tweaks for the flow, namely in the chorus...
i.e. - I never liked the rain as much as you (-did)
on some deleted poem
2 Mar 2004, 8:18 PM
I like this. Good job.
on Pop the Pill by etherealmaiden
2 Mar 2004, 8:21 PM
I think this is more about a feeling....wanting to take the drugs to kill the pain...not so much in actually doing it. Been there myself...I like it.
on where to go by AskittlesK
2 Mar 2004, 8:22 PM
This kind of makes me think that Hendrix and Jim Morrison got drunk together...
on Uncle Sam Is Dead by Lenore
2 Mar 2004, 8:26 PM
I like the ideas....but a little militant...
on In My Minds Eye by daveslady
3 Mar 2004, 3:12 PM
Very emotional....and for that....a 10
on To MY Mother by daveslady
3 Mar 2004, 3:28 PM
Almost made me cry
on Hope, Approximately by wilco
10 Mar 2004, 7:43 PM
I am sick as I write this, so it might not make any sense. If not.....sorry.
on some deleted poem
17 Mar 2004, 5:54 PM
I feel where you're coming from because the weather is completely erratic where I live. (Is it everywhere?)
on Untitled *involves taking pills and cutting with razors* by AskittlesK
21 Mar 2004, 4:36 PM
I sincerely hope that you're not really cutting yourself....but if you are then I would like to make the suggestion (perhaps unwanted) that you see your doctor about getting some antidepressants that ARE yours. I did like your poem though, by the way.
on Quiet Lakes by Fear of Garbage
23 Mar 2004, 1:16 PM
I like this one.